Review Detail of Lindsay_P in The Villainess's Mission

Item: The Villainess's Mission
Rating: 3.6

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this story is a solid idea, however I felt the constant shift between 2nd and 3rd person to be extremely annoying. could definitely do with some reworking.

The Villainess's Mission

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