The story is not bad, I would give it 4 stars, because the system seems good to me and the MC is not a pervert hungry for female flesh, the characters are solid and I like the detail that the MC's parents seem to care about him, and have critical thinking, instead of being brain dead NPC's, but this story needs a huge amount of editing, URGENTLY. 40% of the sentences are cut in half, leaving the rest separated into different paragraphs, example: Hello my name is Jeff. That's extremely annoying to read, especially for me, because English is not my mother tongue and sometimes I find it hard to understand what the fuck some characters mean. Otherwise, good start, an entertaining story that I can recommend if you have some free time, 3.8 stars and if the author corrects the mentioned mistakes, then I will delete this review and give it 4 stars.

In fact, going through ROOT is not such a bad idea, let's see, Danzo contrary to what many think, does not train shinobi for the purpose of sending them on daily suicide missions, the guy trains his personal army in the shadows to ensure large numbers of elite shinobi, the only concern to keep in mind is that to select said shinobi, they put them in death matches among their peers, something that would pose no challenge to the MC after receiving basic shinobi academy training, for it is a fact that an ordinary genin is hundreds of times stronger than an adult civilian. So I would propose in the future to have a narrative arc that encompasses ROOT training. Mostly because it offers three advantages that are very hard to ignore: Rigorous training by an elite shinobi like Danzo, based on stealth, reconnaissance, assassination and advanced shinobi arts. A deeper understanding of the organization, which offers insight into how to dismantle Danzo from the inside. An in-depth study of Danzo's character, giving the MC the ability to predict him with ease and eliminate him relatively easily.

Buen comienzo, sin muchos errores hasta ahora, espero más capítulos que sean igual de entretenidos..........................🗣🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

In fact it's not as forced as it seems, that change is usually more common than you think, have you never been in a situation where a particular news, action or event made you realize a flaw of yours, or the futility of your actions? The MC's father basically had an epiphany, seeing his wife leave him for absolutely nothing made him realize that the MC is not at fault, or at least that's how I interpret it.

Really? Good thing I don't care about the opinion of a WN noname who keeps licking the balls of a mononeuronal author, besides why would you care what I do with my life? Work on your thing loser, I don't need to brag on the internet about my personal accomplishments, I'm not an attention whore like you.

Are you retarded or do you like to pretend you are? You can't go around calling others assholes and acting smart when you have a secondary account just to spew hate on other people's stories, on top of that giving stupid arguments, besides you have a comment above that proves it, if you're going to choke on the subnormal's balls then do it in private.

Here, you can have it as a gift.

Absolutely right, instead of backtracking and correcting very noticeable blunders (in this case a very stupid characterization of Aizawa and using stupid nonsense arguments to justify a bad decision that hurts the whole story as a whole), they go on rants saying nonsense like that, the subjects by the simple fact of writing fanfics on a free platform boost their own tiny ego refusing to accept their mistakes and putting the responsibility on their readers.

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I recommend the author to retouch all this introduction, it is very evident that it is made by artificial intelligence which will scare many potential readers, I will give it a chance, but I strongly recommend doing everything by own hand, believe me when I tell you that a reader will always notice the effort and dedication in a story when it is made by human hand.

Notice that you have changed your argument from "Yuki does not affect the surrounding area" to "Yuki's attack will not be taken into account". I repeat again that stubbornness is a disease, my argument I already proved it and coupled with the author of the work has shouted in my face along with the rest of JJK viewers that Gojo is the strongest sorcerer of his time by absurd difference, for the good understander few words are needed.

There is a point where stubbornness becomes a disease, the massive increase of gravity on itself made it start to be an AOE attack, no need to give it too much thought.

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In case the author is wondering, the black hole quirk isn't a literal black hole, so it couldn't even jokingly nullify Limitless, it can't absorb light and it can't alter space-time like a real black hole (Kurogiri could warp 13's attack XDDDDDD, against a real BH that thing would probably implode on him.

Gravitational powers probably don't work, if so then Yuki Tsukumo would be the strongest sorceress over Gojo himself, and it is implied in the artwork that Gojo could tear Yuki apart if these two collide. The way to break through the Limitless technique would be in the same way as Sukuna, a world-crossing cut, with Mirio's quirk, Toji's spear (although it should no longer be possible, because this tool overrides innate techniques in the Jujutsu Kaisen world, but the author did not specify whether the MC's power is a cursed technique, which will require cursed energy or a MHA quirk) and with an ability like Mahoraga's, which is completely tailored to a specific phenomenon.

It would be the case if the actual events of your story could be called plot, because the "plot" is that the X-Men come to a fight of the protagonist with an NPC in a totally random way, CASUALLY among these was the person that justly needed the protagonist, ie, basically a random plot armor did the job to the protagonist because literally the guy did nothing, the author will probably say "🤓☝🏻 in fact everything that happened was just what he had planned" but the narrative logic behind it all is a mess of random events that end up starting the "plot" (which you take quite a while to get to by the way). As for the main character, he's like I said, an edgy guy with no personality who thinks with his gun first before his head (not in the sexual sense), add to that the guy doesn't even have enough strength to back up his actions and you have a dysfunctional guy in every aspect who tries to be badass, basically CRINGE (the last thing you expect when you have DANTE in the title). As for updates, there's one chapter that was uploaded three days after the previous one, most two, there's a reason I say "between 2 and 3 days". Except for the last one which can be a problem depending on the reader's patience, I only talked about the problems that the author counter-argued from my review giving the relatively deep analysis of everything, which in principle I didn't plan to do because the truth is you don't have to explain much why a story is mid when it's pretty obvious, and when I wrote this the story had few chapters, so there was a lot of room for improvement and I didn't plan to demoralize the creator. But it has a pretty weak narrative, the fights are bland, it has several clichés (most recently "Cyclops = bad and MC = good") and overall it's a story worthy of the two stars aspiring to 3 if only the update periods were common. If you're wondering "is it readable?". Well yes, it's mostly understandable and not on the level of a Chinese fanfic, but it's far from good and I personally don't recommend it.

An outstanding story and with a pretty good base idea, the narration is correct, the plot doesn't break at any important moment having only a small casualty with the subject of Itadori's Shikigami (a tip for the author, if a resource used doesn't convince you then take it out of scene in a natural way, Itadori's Shikigami had the strength of a rank 1 curse, it wasn't very strong, you could simply kill her while doing her duty, it's more feasible than ignoring her existence as if she magically didn't exist, same with any other resource you want to remove, think smart before being impulsive, a character can only be as smart as the author is). Itadori's growth feels natural and doesn't break Jujutsu Kaisen's story, there aren't many changes but that makes sense, Itadori is much stronger but he's not Gojo Satoru, he's not Jesus Christ on earth, but still there are slight but significant changes. Overall I find it an awesome story, I can't give it 5 stars because the update times per chapter are irregular, that wouldn't be a problem if they were long chapters, but they are not, they all usually last more or less the same, may the author keep doing a great job, as long as he keeps uploading chapters and keeping this level, the story will climb many places in the ranking for sure.

Precisely because it has only one game it doesn't have more potential, what is the greatest feat shown in DmC? Besides the fact that the most powerful demons and angels are nothing compared to guys like Argosax, and are much less compared to Mundus OG, you can't claim that one character has more potential than another without true evidence and shield your argument by simply saying "if they had the same amount of games things would be different". The reality is that there is only one DmC Devil May Cry game and there is absolutely nothing to support that Dante just because he is an angel/demon hybrid has more potential than Dante OG.

This Dante has no more potential than that of the main saga, mainly because anything Dante DmC does is already done by Dante OG and much better, in that case you have to give him the template of Dante DMC 3 or that of the first novel.