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pfffff

It looks promising........................................................................................................................................................

Rest in peace, Boss...

Now we're going to enter another one of those boring arcs where the protagonist is completely out of the picture. The worst part is that the situation that led to this is so stupid and meaningless that I simply find it hard to believe that the author thought it was a good idea, let alone necessary. The author went too far in his pretentiousness by trying to imitate the style of works such as Game of Thrones or One Punch Man, with too much screen time divided among multiple characters. The thing is, that works in those works because each character has an interesting narrative, and everything surrounding them feels logical and fluid. This is simply too far-fetched a way of trying to get the protagonist off screen. There were at least five possible and completely reasonable situations compared to what is happening now to resolve the kidnapping issue (it wasn't that difficult either). Well, this is just one last rant before I abandon this story. I wanted to wait and see how the author was going to resolve this whole issue, but the truth is, I'm completely off board. The update times are too long for the low quality of the chapters. Good luck with whatever you do next.

This story is taking a turn for the worse.

And one more thing, the fact that the protagonist is a warg is completely irrelevant to the story. It is only mentioned about four times in the 31 chapters of the story and serves no purpose. The protagonist himself is not as impressive as he is portrayed; he is simply a competent fighter who later obtains a Valyrian steel sword and still manages to be humiliated by a wounded, old Barristan with inferior weaponry. Congratulations, author, truly congratulations on creating probably the most fraudulent protagonist I have seen in a long time.

Your trashy author didn't even make it to 50 chapters, clown 😂😂😂

I had forgotten about this story, but in the end, time always proves the wise right. Thank you for bringing me back here. Now I can mock a clown who said I should apologize if the author reached 100 chapters, typical of a fanboy of a trashy author.

Thank you very much for the chapter, I hope you can prevail in a situation as hard as the one you are currently living, I hope you reach the goal soon.

A chapter that you can tell that it was made without desire, first of all Kazuya got the passive clairvoyance before, the fact that he was caught off guard IN HIS FACE is simply the author trying to lengthen the chapter with all his might, that the characters talk so much before a fight is also absurd and doesn't fit with the style shown by Kazuya before, all full of script holes and inconsistencies, so far it's the worst chapter of this story and by far the worst, if the author wasted 10 days to bring us this, better he would have left during if it meant he did something at least of decent quality.