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I’m Pretty sure he had a faster cultivation speed and his system was much more op it’s why he was able to do what he did whereas this guy needs to actually get out and look for a way to improve his talent or something to speed up his cultivation………………….

I kinda liked the review drops, keep it up

Helena’s comment is sus, does that mean she is connected to Voldemort’s sudden change?

VeRy good so far, need more. loki would be very pleased of this system. I Like this oVer Your other book. Keep up with the good work.

Its fascinating to read this novel, just Needs to Improve dialogue between the characters as well as the reactions of the wider supposed audience. When creating the world try to make simple to envision without losing the style of writing.

Free Exp !!

Harry Potter gets 1 less Detention

Hmm Rowan...

Ehh snape...