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I think you should add some more scenes about the government trying to nuke him or something. If its about different worlds i think acheron should kill a teleporter to get his powers than travel because he can sense life and basically he has limitless stamina to find life.How can acheron be a mutant when he got his powers from an unknown lifeform and author if there is gonna be an 18 scene it should after he gets married imean its obvious he'll get married to her otherwise the foreshadowing decreases.

I think 2 girls and mc is ok but anymore may effect the story in a bad way if not done correctly like previous amazing novels. Oh yeah i think some sci-fi elements should be added in fights eg: 2 peaple with power to control hydrogen and compression to cuase masive nuclear explosions. Love the novel and character growth mc and people around him👍👍👍👍👍 I hope that the mc starts caring for like 3 people and can stay emotionless for any other.