Shameless author here, this is my first novel, i hope you guys like it. Any serious reviews will be much appreciated, ill try to meet your expectations the best i can, i wont make them a priority tho, its my novel after all.
AinzOolGown0601
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LIKEI think you should add some more scenes about the government trying to nuke him or something. If its about different worlds i think acheron should kill a teleporter to get his powers than travel because he can sense life and basically he has limitless stamina to find life.How can acheron be a mutant when he got his powers from an unknown lifeform and author if there is gonna be an 18 scene it should after he gets married imean its obvious he'll get married to her otherwise the foreshadowing decreases.
AinzOolGown0601:right now the story is based entirely on earth but... i do have some ideas that could expand it, nothing concrete yet tho.
Spoilers (maybe): i haven't really revealed his actual powers but hyper regeneration/immortality is just the one he is most known for
anarchyboi:What are his powers except his immortality?
I just kind of realized that Acheron's powers and original background kind of resembles Vandal Savage from the Marvel comics. Check him out, it's pretty cool. I made the connection and I was like "huh, this sounds familiar." Also, did u take inspiration from a book titled acheron and it's by sherrilyn Kenyon? Really great book if you haven't read it!
I have used Acheron by Sherrilyn Kanyon as inspiration in some parts. One of my favorite books btw. Acheron's immortality is similar a mix of wolverine and deadpool's but without the delay and aging.
Eternal_Ouroboros:I just kind of realized that Acheron's powers and original background kind of resembles Vandal Savage from the Marvel comics. Check him out, it's pretty cool. I made the connection and I was like "huh, this sounds familiar." Also, did u take inspiration from a book titled acheron and it's by sherrilyn Kenyon? Really great book if you haven't read it!
I've never been on hiatus lol i have been writing for year now. i just update once a week on sundays at this point. so biggest flaw of this novel right now is slow updates.
Nikhil_Chand:it's not updated for 5 days is this still going on? also I see these comments are 8 months to 1 yr old that means novel was on hiatus previously?