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DaoistRu30rN

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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
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    But I also don't agree with what you said about the novel not having any dialogue at all and it only has details and narrating only which is not true at all.

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim.B.Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
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    But if you are talking about the first 3 chapters of it combined then...I guess everyone could agree that there is not really that much interaction between the characters in the novel.

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim.B.Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
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    Which chapter do you mean there is no dialogue? The first chapter? Are you sure you didn't see the entirety of the first chapter? There are actually some conversation at the second half of the first chapter (and there is just a bit of conversation at the first half of the first chapter).

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim.B.Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
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    I am just writing for anyone who wants to read this review. For anyone who likes to read the reviews of a book before reading the first chapter, you are welcomed to read my review of the story first. The novel An unknown world is a story about a boy named Barry, who is a 13 year old with psychic powers. The story plot may be confusing for anyone at first, but that is what the author intended to do to make it as a mystery. But before anyone of you could even say that this novel might be categorized in the 'isekai' category, I would like to urge you to drop that thought as it is not really going in that direction. But it is merely a part of the beginning of the story. So if you want to know what are the lists of tags for this novel, someone else will be helping me with that.

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim.B.Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
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    The reason why it is rated as 4.8 is because the novel is release every 3 days. But do not let it discourage you, I will tell you that it's chapters are worth the wait for its release.

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Posted

    Hello to the new (and old) readers of this novel, I, DaoistRu30rN, a loyal reader of this novel. I would like to invite you to read this wonderful novel made by the author himself. If you have the same interests as me (and have the same opinion with me), I guarantee you that you will not get tired with it. If you liked the novel and it has piqued your interest in it, you can support the author by adding it to your library, vote for it, write a review/comment and send gifts (if possible). But you have the option to stay as a reader/viewer, if you want to. The author also states that he doesn't force anyone if they don't want to. So, it is your choice.

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Replied to Tim_B_Suana_18

    Thanks for the heads-up, author. Keep up the good work.[img=update][img=recommend]

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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim. B. Suana
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Replied to Daoist7mgYfi

    Okay then

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    An unknown world (Short Story)
    Others · Tim_B_Suana_18
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN2yr
    Replied to Tim_B_Suana_18

    Oh great! When will it be released?

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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Replied to Tim_B_Suana_18

    Thank you

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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Commented

    Nice chapter😎

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Awaking from the strange dream
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Replied to DaoistRu30rN

    This is my second review by the way.

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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Posted

    Here are some of my explanation for why I have rated it like this:- 1) Writing quality (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the author bothered to go through his story to improve the quality and readability of the first chapter for the sake of his readers. Which is a commendable thing that the author has done. So, let's say it is as a bonus for getting 5 stars. Not only that, I like how it is now turned from 1st person to 3rd person POV, which is even more attractive than the previous version. The author even added some explanation in his narration and the writing style is indeed great. 2) Story development (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the speed flow of the novel is just nice. Not too fast, not too slow, instead just perfect. 3) Character design (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author did explain to us how the other characters look like which I guess is fine. But I know that all of us here as readers do want to know how the main character looks like, am I right? So, I hope the author will soon explain to us how the main character looks like. 4) Updating stability (3 stars) I am rating it three stars because I guess the author is now busy with a lot of things at the moment so I am just going to give three stars at least for taking the time to edit the first few chapters of this novel. 5) World background (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author only then explained about the surrounding of the other world in chapter 8, I guess? So, all in all, I guess the author did a wonderful job with the novel that the author has made. And keep up the good work, dear author.[img=recommend]

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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Replied to DaoistRu30rN

    Anyways, well done author.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Replied to DaoistRu30rN

    You even added some explanation in it.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Commented

    I even noticed that you have added some scenes into the first chapter of this novel and made some changes in some parts of it, which is a good thing for you and the readers.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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    An unknown world
    Fantasy · Tim_B_Suana_18
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  • DaoistRu30rN
    DaoistRu30rN3yr
    Replied to Tim_B_Suana_18

    Agreed, the conversation part in this first chapter of the novel is now much better than before.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: First Encounter into the Other World
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