Review Detail of DaoistRu30rN in An unknown world

Here are some of my explanation for why I have rated it like this:- 1) Writing quality (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the author bothered to go through his story to improve the quality and readability of the first chapter for the sake of his readers. Which is a commendable thing that the author has done. So, let's say it is as a bonus for getting 5 stars. Not only that, I like how it is now turned from 1st person to 3rd person POV, which is even more attractive than the previous version. The author even added some explanation in his narration and the writing style is indeed great. 2) Story development (5 stars) I am rating it five stars because the speed flow of the novel is just nice. Not too fast, not too slow, instead just perfect. 3) Character design (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author did explain to us how the other characters look like which I guess is fine. But I know that all of us here as readers do want to know how the main character looks like, am I right? So, I hope the author will soon explain to us how the main character looks like. 4) Updating stability (3 stars) I am rating it three stars because I guess the author is now busy with a lot of things at the moment so I am just going to give three stars at least for taking the time to edit the first few chapters of this novel. 5) World background (4 stars) I am rating it four stars because the author only then explained about the surrounding of the other world in chapter 8, I guess? So, all in all, I guess the author did a wonderful job with the novel that the author has made. And keep up the good work, dear author.[img=recommend]