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Right........ Let's go to a 4 star restaurant, where god is the chef. I really wonder how she could afford it, considering literally no one else in the world has ever been to one before. You're trying too hard to make things extravagant.
Dude, please update the auxiliary chapter. Add all the girls in the harem, and maybe a short description of the others. For example who Kaya is, who her mother is etc...
She should be the head of the Housewife Association. Or the head of the Rei Fanclub. Or the Head priestess of the religion of their lord and savior Rei.
I don't want the MC to NOT have problems, but having a dude constantly plotting to bring ruin to the mc is annoying af, I really hope you don't make the noble slaver too much of a problem. Apart from that it's really nice. Just waiting for the magic to happen and for the whole family to be in love with the mc [img=update].
Piece of sh8t stole the story, don't support him. And Shiro didn't ask to create new accounts, he said IF we have webnovel accounts. The author even pinged the only 5 star reviews he has, which are probably from his alternate accounts.
Very nice, I'm not too far into it, but the character seems to be developing a bit. Just a question, will there ever be a relationship between MC and Hestia/Theia?
Writing quality is good though has recently become less than average. The author wants to catch up to his promised updates, so the chapters are a lot shorter and rushed recently. (AUTHOR IT'S ALRIGHT YOU DON'T HAVE TO CATCH UP, TAKE YOUR TIME, THE RECENT CHAPTERS ARE SHORT, RUSHED AND THEIR QUALITY HAS DROPPED A LOT). Stability of updates is alright. Character design, is nothing special
Oh how I wish he updated a lot more. Writing quality is one of the best I have ever seen. Story development is awesome, though slower than usual, because there are no illogical things happening; everything has a reason and the women don't suddenly have s8x with him 2 days after meeting him. Character design is awesome, there is no contradiction of character so far. World background I can't comment upon, so far we have only heard of the rural town and the capital without anything else.
Writing quality is top notch. Story development is very good, though I wish he reveals his identity soon (to all the people he cares about). Character design is awesome, all of them have weaknesses, act different, have a different way of speech and there is never a contradiction of character without reason. The world background is good, as far as I know it's as if he created a whole new universe. MC doesn't act like a dumb harem protagonist so that's a plus.