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VanceGS

VanceGS

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Writing is hard.

2020-11-30 JoinedGlobal
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to aSleepyPenguin

    The system doesn't promote laziness. This idea is that.

    He would have liked to complete the hidden mission, but this body wouldn't be able to handle it.
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    Rewriting #1
    Anime & Comics · NovaHyperSage
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to Wowcraft

    Those are usually worse. They're made by contrarians, meaning they change the basic premise normally used only to be different and not for any meaningful reason.

    With resignation, he finally said. "Damn, at the very least, you could have had the decency to transmigrate me to a safer universe."
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    Rewriting #1
    Anime & Comics · NovaHyperSage
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to LOF

    "Friend of the author... honest review..." Who are you trying to fool? Here, let me fix this for you. Honesty is the best policy. "Friend of the author... biased review..." See a moderator reviewing a story and saying they're a friend of the author? Don't trust that. Never. It is essentially as useful as spam reviews that'll have the thumbs-up emoji printed out 250 times. So, basically, not at all useful.

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    I Became The Pope, Now What?
    Fantasy · MisterImmortal
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to NappyAfro

    "Anybody with speed..." What if you can't see them? Smell them? Hear them, even? What if they hide their body heat by moving colder air around themselves? Undetectable. HP magic is insane. There are no rules. Everything is intent-based. The sheer amount of options a wizard from HP has makes me dizzy. They can freeze your body, make you blind, lock your legs together, take over your mind, make you kill yourself for them, wipe away memories, and alter reality with a fucking luck potion. It is genuinely ridiculous how OP they are. You aren't the first idiot to think a gun is an end-all-be-all for them. News flash: A gun kills everybody. The difference? Not everybody is a wizard, mate. Just the knowledge of the Killing Curse would have the Clock Tower from Fate designate a sealing order on the entirety of Wizarding Britain. Mix HP magic with almost any other power and watch a guy win. The other speng who said they'd dodge and use a gun? Good luck. Spells move FAST. Faster than a 100mph fastball in baseball. That's less than 0.5 seconds to react to one. Imagine trying to dodge four of those coming at you?

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    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS1yr
    Commented

    Grammar, where is it? Am I blind? "What does this even mean? I need to go see a therapist. I've probably read one too many fanfictions."*

    'What does this even mean, I need to go see a therapist, it seems like I have read one too many fanfictions...'
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    Naruto: The curse of Hatred
    Anime & Comics · Enri007
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to Gambit_bandit

    One of the best fanfics out there? What? Absolutely not. Zero percent. You've just done a madness. Go check out the better stories on FFnet. Webnovel is not filled with anything even remotely close to "the best out there."

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    Aden Strong: Avatar In DC
    TV · Saintbarbido
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS1yr
    Commented

    So you're one of those authors then. The type to not write even a completed chapter before posting it and saying they'll write advanced chapters for their Patreon. Got it. News Flash: No one wants to buy advanced "chapters" when you can't even be bothered to write a full one. You're posting in parts.

    (A/N: I'm going to write 2 chapters for patreòn tonight. Other than that, expect 1 chapter on here tomorrow at 12pm est. not sure about my webnovel schedule yet, but it's probably going to be 1 chapter everyday at 12pm est and maybe a day off on Saturday? Not sure yet. Thanks for reading!)
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    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to CultivatingReader

    "The magic system with little to no rules, with the few rules that exist easily able to be worked around, and can alter reality and kill with two words, is D-tier." - The idiot that made the review.

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    I'm Batman (HP Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to Ritol

    That's mostly just Webnovel fanfics tbh. I don't think these authors can help it since the readers refuse to tell them how bad they are at writing. Enclosed spaces, narrow worldviews, and all that other good stuff.

    At that moment I understood, Voldemort's loyal followers sent a dementor to perform a dementor's kiss on me. I will die any moment now. NO, I CAN'T DIE HERE I WON'T DIE LIKE THIS!
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    Harry Potter: Wanted
    Book&Literature · Booggie
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to RuffyRaph

    I sometimes wish that these Webnovel authors would learn what English is. We don't always get what we want.

    To the begging of MY third year
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    Harry Potter: Wanted
    Book&Literature · Booggie
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS1yr
    Commented
    To do everything over again? To live a life like a regular man? To work day after day? NO, I WOULDN'T I might want to take different paths so I wouldn't be dying now but, I would still be me!
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    Harry Potter: Wanted
    Book&Literature · Booggie
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    VanceGS1yr
    Replied to Dark_Magma

    I found it but apparently, it's been trashed. The author is some dude called Seud.

    The goddess finished with a threatening chuckle, flipping her page and starting to read again. "Anyway, I will remove your memory after we're done choosing a power and world for you. And no, you can't just choose any you wish, you'd simply roll a Fate Roluttee which will give you a power. It depends on your luck honestly on what you get, but I would suggest you hope you're not too lucky. Later on, you'd roll a World Wheel to choose your world."
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    The Cursed Gamer
    Anime & Comics · Master4thWall
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Replied to Solar_Clipse0

    It’s not that serious, calm down.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
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    Wandering in Omniverse
    Anime & Comics · Captain_Killer
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Commented

    Peace out. You can’t keep to a theme for the life of you. This is like a DC character saying they’re as strong as Thanos. Or even a Game of Thrones character saying they’re the Prince of all Saiyans. Jesus people, it’s not hard to write good stories.

    If his body was weak, he would endure hell in training that would make even Might Guy blush with shame.
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    Multiverse Conquest: Rise of the Saiyan Empire.
    Anime & Comics · Thunder_Dawn
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Commented

    Reality is much better, I agree.

    "Not in your dreams." She reciprocates the gesture. 
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    Invincible Me
    Anime & Comics · Reidrain
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Replied to nicholas8293

    Funny, the Chinese even hate the Chinese. So, epic failure?

    Good. Lovely, train me to be as deadly as you are, stronger even. I'm ready to put the effort in. You'll probably be proud. Because I know exactly which buttons to push to make you so. And when this is all over with, the moment I realize that you're no longer a threat, we'll have a hell of a time Omni-man.
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    Invincible Me
    Anime & Comics · Reidrain
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    VanceGS2yr
    Replied to 7350Ledger

    But dude, everything else is shit.

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    MY Life In The Multiverse
    Anime & Comics · Bakorio
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Commented

    Guys, I think it may be forbidden!

    If that person was here he would say our souls mashed together and merged but I don't dare to think of that. My mother used to say spirits always listened and talking about the soul is forbidden.
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    Lord of Fire is a Gamer
    Anime & Comics · Lowkeygoodstuff
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  • VanceGS
    VanceGS2yr
    Replied to LordPhenex026

    I can actually base your writing quality on your comment. My thoughts so far? It’s lacking.

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    I'm Leveling up in DXD
    Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
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    VanceGS2yr
    Replied to Unholy_Student

    If you truly want to know why, then it’s because of the word count. Authors on this platform artificially up their word counts by having characters ponder over things that really don’t need pondering, or just overall have them struggling with simple concepts so that other characters can then explain those concepts in vivid detail. On a platform where you can only enter the rankings depending on word count, people do this all the time. It’s also a frequent ccurence with newer writers who think their readers are dumber than average.

    'I remember now... Farid... That kid arrived just a day ago... Is he having problems socializing with the other kids? Strange, that has never happened before...'
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    One piece: Unwilling Idle System User
    Anime & Comics · Anonyrius
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