EldritchAuthor

Nice!

Putting the absolute joke of a synopsis aside; The novel has a fairly interesting plot and concept, though it feels extremely forced at times. However, the quality of writing hampers this to no end. Issues with past/present tense are abundant, spelling mistakes are more than frequent, and the overall writing is below average, even for books on a site such as this. Overall, Give it a shot, maybe; But I wouldn't waste your fast passes or spirit stones on new chapters.

Speaking about somebody else writing when your own is like this. surely not XD

Fun novel with well paced out progression as of the 12 chapters I have read. Writing quality is good compared to other stories of the same genre. Stability of updates is consistent, though chapters are quite short. Not enough chapters in to note any character design flaws yet, though the majority of character actions seem fairly realistic. World background seems standard for the genre, though its not necessarily a bad thing.

Fresh take on the fairly overdone Litrpg genre. Writing quality is overall rather good, though some issues with past/present tenses, and some spelling mistakes are present, they do become less frequent as more chapters come out. Descriptions can be a little info-dumpy, but this also allows the pacing of the rest of the story to be consistent, which is a plus, From what I have read, Story development seems to be going at a reasonable pace. Character design is fine, though the main character seems a little flat, akin to a vast majority of protagonists in the same genre. World background is very typical for the genre, similar to many other stories. This may act as a turn-away for some, but also means that the focus of the reader's attention will be the goings on of the main character, rather than the world itself; This isn't to say there is no uniqueness, just that it resembles other stories a fair amount.

Will look forward to see you improve! Another thing to mention is the switch from first person perspective to third person at about the 7th chapter, not sure if this is intentional?

!Self Review! Hey all, Author here- This is my first real attempt at a webnovel, and as such I hope anyone that gets around to reading it can offer feedback and such to help me improve. I am attempting to publish one chapter of between 1.5 and 2.5 thousand words/day for the time being, though expect some inconsistencies. This story will have more than one MC/ viewpoint character, and will incorporate things from genres such as 'cultivation' 'system' 'magic' 'magical realism' into a singular story; I hope to create a fresh take for those that typically enjoy those genres.

Is this a joke? one chapter per week, not to mention the chapters are like 1k words at best- and you've paywalled it? Really not sure how this managed to find its way into my recommended, but I hope it never does again :D

Its an alright read, pretty mediocre really, I'm fairly sure the 4.7 rating is just because of bots spamming 5* ratings.