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As a Brazilian I am laughing too much with these references, it is undeniable that each Brazilian broadcaster has its "favorite" in this period was Lula by Gloco and currently we have a support from Bolsonaro by SBT and Record.

Ingrid is scaring me ...

Do as I do, pretend that these notes below the chapters do not exist. Better than having hopes all the time.

Author you really need to stop the extra chapters, because so far you owe 19 chapters and your novel is getting more famous. So I see two options, stop the extra chapters until you complete these or continue like this but increase the limit of power stones by chapters, as you are apparently making three novels and sometime some of them will be sacrificed or you will become several chapters for the readers.

No one can deny that coincidences happen, compared to the other MC's, at least what he had was not a chance encounter or a master who learned and gave him a God-level technique. And the part of the coincidence between restaurant owners and cannibals ... we had some cases in Brazil, a trio made and put in snacks for people.

There are differences between control and lack. The MC goes through several lives, that is, basically the concept of time has almost lost its meaning, can you imagine a person going through different realities returning to his and in the end being described only as manipulative? Apathy would be more accurate, the mere attempt by the author to make him excited or happy with trivial things in the original reality, seems false and forced, so that we can identify more with the MC.

I'm 20 chapters from finishing the raw material, so I can probably give a solid opinion. Summing up an interesting start to a subsequent tedious development, this flaw is very similar to novels of the same type, such as "48 hours a day", due to the paradigm shift and the different MC time flow, we end up seeing an apathetic main character. During the chapters that he is with the family you can observe him with feelings, but this is forced by the author, if you spent decades or centuries living as a monarch, sect leader, mercenary or anything else, you would immediately be able to recover your previous behavior and all feelings towards your family? Certainly not and this is one of the novel's biggest flaws. In addition, it is essential to point out a lack of worldwide development, 300 chapters and are practically the same -_-, if you expect development of secondary characters give up, due to the speed that it changes from one world to another it is basically impossible to develop a character deeply. But although this criticism, it is still a decent story compared to the other webnovels put on trials in previous times, the MC is not an asshole, we have a wide variety of cultivation systems, without harem and lastly an enemy that although it makes the story goes fast, makes us observe several worlds of cultivation.