I'm not sure where this gem has been hiding😂But I'm so glad I found it🤣🤣Little Zombie is a complete menace! yet he's only a side character! That alone should tell you how much thought is put into each character. You have my full 5 stars!

I laughed until I cried🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Wasn't it a year ago?🤨or had I read it wrong?

I'm not gonna lie, I half expected him to be a green tea type or an arrogant 'world revolves around me' type, but he actually hasn't done anything malicious so far.

This story...has potential as a relaxing slice of life story...however..it lacks a bit of depth? Even the relationships, friendships and such between the protagonist and other characters are as shallow as a puddle of water on a side walk. The character Alice, is annoying to death in just the first few chapters with her habit of jumping to conclusions. The MC doesn't have money so automatically he's spending it on gambling and prostitutes and you feel the need to educate him without giving him a chance to say ABC...Also, the characters personalities are inconsistent as hell, like it's not even about getting to know them more, it's a complete 360 eg Maya who goes from a cold, elegant beauty to a playful overly flirty little girl in just a few chapters. But the thing that irks me the most is definitely the forced conflicts eg the neighbour who broke his(Mc's) guitar and Maya's boyfriend getting jealous and breaking up with her over the Mc over had no substance then she seemingly develops feelings for the Mc after the breakup like the boyfriend didn't matter at all...just erase the boyfriend then💀 Too many plot holes. However if the author chooses to eventually edit and add more chapters in between to add more depth the character relationships, it's could get a higher rating.

I'm really enjoying this story. Glad I encountered it The Mc's personality is a bit refreshing because God knows I'm tired of the forced indifference from other novel characters. This Mc is just naturally cute and clueless so everything just flows😂😂Completely relatable. Also, so far I haven't encountered any 'blushing girls' and all that harem leading nonsense. I really hope no harems comes in, it just wouldn't suit the Mc's personality. Just 1 FL will do. The grammar is good, there are a few mistakes here and there like his pen name translation changing every other chapter...overall, very good read

I am very much enjoying the story so far, even the zombie fighting scenes have me sneaking a read during work hours, however before I continue , can someone tell me whether it's a harem? cause I'm tired to death of harems, and also, does it contain incest? cause the closeness between the siblings have been bluring a few lines for me so far and I don't think I'd be able to continue if there is

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I actually laughed out loud at this, because in Jamaica, 'rass' or more commonly spelt 'raas' is actually a curse word😂It took a second to realize he's not cursing in Jamaican, it's just a sound😂

If you have ever read 'Losing Money To Be A Tycoon' then you've basically already read this novel. It's almost a carbon copy, just replace the 'creating games to lose money' with livestreaming. The reaction of the Mc and the people around him, everything is almost the same. Using a certain novel as your framework is good, but when you basically don't have much of your own ideas in said novel then it brings a ' copy and paste' feeling instead of 'using as a guide'..As a result I don't really have much to say since I, myself am a fan of 'Losing Money to be a Tycoon'..

So, I decided I'd read all the available chapters before review. In Summary, I had to jump, hop and skip over almost each and every paragraph and only catch one and two sentences I'm between to try to patch together the storyline because more than ¾ of each chapter is just pure mathematical formulas and scientific gibberish that I'm getting is from the intellectual part of Google because normal people just won't make sense of what the MC is talking about. Initially, I believed this type of writing would be temporary but it was really not. The potential of the story is buried under the mou ntains of x=n2 blah blah blah that goes on for 6-8 lengthy paragraphs. We really don't need to see all this because we really don't read the math explanations word for word and letter for letter.It was a bit disappointing when I realized that if all the mathematical explanations were removed ...this story would barely have 10 chapters if so much. The only chapters without equations are the sexual scenes and even those are short and rushed in comparison.The personality of the MC really rubs me the wrong way though. He's a cocky show off and uses every opportunity to brag about how smart he is. ZERO humility even when facing those more academically accomplished than him. He seems to believe he was born to have his nose above the clouds and then hypocritically calls someone with the same arrogance as him 'pretentious and cocky'. It's a pot calling the kettle black type of MC. The apparent FL is made out to be some form of always horny type. You don't really read much about her aside from the sexual scenes and then 'poof' she disappears until both are horny againWorld Building is zero so far. Don't know if it improves after another 50 chapters...doubt it. A whole lot more big and small complains but you get it.

my thoughts exactly 😂😂😂

The R18 scenes are creatively written though, you can tell Sir Author has a knack for it, If he can completely revamped this novel with his original ideas and plots, then it could definitely have some top votes

I'm not gonna lie, this novel grabbed me with the first 20-25 or so chapters. Everything more or less made sense and the scenes were described well....BUUUT when you cross the 30 and especially the 40 chapter border, you realize, the whole plot has long turned into shxt. MInd you sir, although it's that many chapters is, it's only the 2nd day in the actual novel yet ALL the heroines have already had a VERY VERY drastic change in their ENTIRE personalities and even the 1st protag had already become useless, keep in mind , as I said, it's just the 2nd day. The protag and our Mc has only met around 3 very short times and he has already lost his son of heaven halo and the 2nd protag is here to replace him already. The plot has just completely been thrown out the window and most of the scenes just focus on him banging the heroines. Because of this, even his initial skills that pulled me in, have already been thrown off the burner . At chapter 58, which I believe is as far as I can push through , there is just no plot anymore. This guy already plans to bang his daughters and granddaughters. I have no more hope for this novel. My opinion is that the author depended too heavily on the random suggestions in the comments instead of sticking with their original idea of the story.

Dear Author, could we get a filler chapter of the parents discovering their son's death?

I finished the whole thing, I really enjoyed it. It has some light n funny moments, alot of faceslapping. BUT personally...I don't know how I feel about the ending. For one, I personally hate when they use just one chapter for the huge time lapse and then a few lines to conclude a book that was over 1000+ chapters. The final chapter is just really lackluster and it showed that the author just really wanted to conclude the book after so many chapters. Like, what about his parents that he had promised to return home after a few years? 21 years later and after the huge time lapse did they die? they just were not mentioned at all. Neither were fraud Tian and the rest. Like WHAT?the were major side characters. Secondly, he ends up with all the girls, even though he really didn't have much of a romantic relationship with any of them. 1 of them he only met like 3 times, the other was around the same with 0 flirty interactions at all. He never even held their hand much less peck their cheek. Yet he married all of them and one even has his child who turned 18 in a few words.(time lapse) I have a few more complains that just stem solely from the final chapter alone. LACKLUSTER is the word. I wished I had just not read the final chapter and used my imagination to conclude the book. Honestly. About the system, He declined immortality just to stay with the females he had 0 romantic interactions and feelings toward. It's just really really dumb and so the system was muted. Sigh...the ending just leaves you feeling uncomfortable all over.

I love this genre of novels. I've been followed this since it was just like 80+ chapters n I waited religiously for the updates each day. now it's at 480+, I'm very much disgusted. Let me tell you why, From the time the Mc started pursuing the FL, he religiously professes she'd be his only girl. The FL was annoying in the beginning, but it was made out to be this epic love story of how he goes through alot to build himself up to get approval to marry her....and 470+ chapters later...he has sex with her sister , and decides 'oh well, since I'm already a scumbag, I'll continue'. Disgusting . The hypocrisy is really really disgusting. He shouldn't have made it sound like(for 470+ Chp) that he'd rather die than be unfaithful to the FL. I'm all for harems usually, but being made to believe a story for majority of a novel just for him to become a hypocrit leaves a bad taste in my mouth. Then I heard, he'll be taking a 3rd girlfriend later on. Yeah, I'm off this train. Adios

So I felt the need to post a review cause I noticed most of the reviews were nonsensical. I think that if you haven't read a novel to a point you shouldn't post misleading reviews. Some claim to have read up to C200 but their review says otherwise so I'll review up to that point. Let's clear up some misleading reviews. 1. Some reviews claim that up to C200, "Mc cannot go a chapter without thinking with his dxxk". But actually, up to C200, Mc has only had sex once which was the very beginning. 2. Some dropped because Mc popped his cherry within the first few chapters claiming it was unnecessary- If you read up to C200, you'll realize why the author made it that way and he also mimicked the opening from the Anime with that female character. 3. The Mc IS a hypocrit, and he does admit to that several times, so no need to point it out in the reviews like it wasn't stated like he was all nice guy pretense. He isnt. The Mc embraces his flaws and he does grow to accept the system because just like anyone would, he got greedy for its rewards and the girls. 4. One thing that was true though- It's reaaalllyyy slow, not with the development and drama, but with the timeline. @C200, only about 1 week and some days has passed since 🤣🤣🤣ALOT happens within that short space so you don't really mind that he seems to do 1 dozen things within just a day🤣🤣but it IS really....shocking how slow the days go by I won't lie. 5. I DO agree with the reviews that bash the world building. The Mc only goes to the convenience store, school and 1 or 2 places nearby up to C200. Whether we'll see fix on that, I'll update this review later on 6. The Mc's assets are bountiful but it's obvious that the book is not(as yet) pushing the Mc to focus on business so ppl need to stop complaining about this point. The book focuses on him becoming a scumbag not him turning into an upright citizen who wants to develop this and that business. 7. This book isn't for those who have heavily invested in the animes mentioned in the book or else it will definitely throw you off. It's like knowing every character in Naruto and then having someone inject their own MC into the story who undermines Naruto character and magnify his flaws. Luckily for me, I haven't seen some of the mentioned Animes and for the ones I have seen, it's been so long that their personalities are really vague (e.g. Mashiro and Kanada) This book is more for relaxing and taking a break from realism.

didn't it say she wasn't from earth?

dear author😭please get rid of this part. the cringe gave me goosebumbs