Review Detail of Sinful_Anarchy in Greatest Superstar System

This story...has potential as a relaxing slice of life story...however..it lacks a bit of depth? Even the relationships, friendships and such between the protagonist and other characters are as shallow as a puddle of water on a side walk. The character Alice, is annoying to death in just the first few chapters with her habit of jumping to conclusions. The MC doesn't have money so automatically he's spending it on gambling and prostitutes and you feel the need to educate him without giving him a chance to say ABC...Also, the characters personalities are inconsistent as hell, like it's not even about getting to know them more, it's a complete 360 eg Maya who goes from a cold, elegant beauty to a playful overly flirty little girl in just a few chapters. But the thing that irks me the most is definitely the forced conflicts eg the neighbour who broke his(Mc's) guitar and Maya's boyfriend getting jealous and breaking up with her over the Mc over had no substance then she seemingly develops feelings for the Mc after the breakup like the boyfriend didn't matter at all...just erase the boyfriend then💀 Too many plot holes. However if the author chooses to eventually edit and add more chapters in between to add more depth the character relationships, it's could get a higher rating.