TM_Orbit

It’s a great book the pacing is just like really slow we’re only on the 2nd week of their genin team being formed and it’s been 55 c hapters

Tuff fr on the dead homies on gang em on crip

Idk if this is a remake or continuation but this book was originally made by Sir Lucifer Morningstar on ff.net and has 14 chapters

I loved your other stories and this one doesn’t disappoint either

Mc

Ummm yk I get you have a vision to write what you want but at the same time I gotta ask why r$p3 like let’s be honest it’s not a good thing so why promote it in your book?

No

I think this is a great book but at the same time there’s no real progression in the story line it took 100 chapter to get to his first nba game and then another 10 for the next one I just believe you need to start writing longer chapters that’s really the only problem with the book tbh. Lack of content and trying to make the story go at a super slow pace can have readers feeling like the books not worth to read. But great job otherwise

Curse teq: The art of Kagutsuchi/ this ability allows the user to gain a connection to cursed flames, these flames can burn hotter than stars and can last longer than Johnny sins. CE 3 for every sec

That would be tuff asf, you would have to start off in a world where it could be like a whole lot of aliens that give different things and then going to like dc and marvel