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Joel_Amoako_717411mthReplied to Mithren*bit not bite
The fight had been over the moment he let the corpse puppet but him and injected corpse poison. At this point, it was only delaying the inevitable.- Joel_Amoako_71742yrCommented
Im sorry what? She had a penis?
"OH GOD, WHY DOES SHE HAVE A PENIS!?" - Joel_Amoako_71742yrReplied to Snowy_Crystals
- Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to Roh594
- Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to RoyalAlpaca_1I replied," First, I wanted Power, which I will be able to get by copying the Cullens and their friends second, I want to blend with people not run every time someone found we are not aging and stuff, and I wanted to give my coven happiness of having children, even eating will be a wonder for them to taste food and third technopath I can remove any details, photos of us from any kinda system or web and with the last aro can't find out my gifts as well as what I can do from reading my coven, and I can create and upgrade the tech I have so that's a bonus ".
- Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to Poolitzer
Technically is it 3 wishes. The author just explained it a lot.
God replied, "Technically, they are 2 wishes, but I will make that happen, but it will not be able to bring back the dead." - Joel_Amoako_71743yrPosted
I gave my rating because I feel like the story is kinda rushed and turned the light novel into a typical isekai manga. Some actions seemed forced, and make no sense. Sometimes I feel like the author adds things for no reasons just so the MC can get closer. The MC'S personality can flip in a instant, he could from feeling unsure to become cocky as ****. He also makes idiotic mistakes like sparing almost every enemy he sees, so they can attack him later on. I stopped reading so i'm not sure if he starts killing later on.
- Joel_Amoako_71743yrCommented
This kind fellow seems nice
"Lift up your head, young boy." The Kind said. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to LocoWriter911
Mc shouldn't be giving money out like this
"1 Gold coin for a dagger which looks as if it can't be sold due to how hard it is to use. Aren't you being a little cold?" John asked as he stared at him. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to Oddly_flamboyant
PERFECT
"These are appa!" Ariel said excitedly. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to CrusaDurarara
Character development and reason for mc to get "closer" to her. Duh
"So I'm not completely useless..." Ariel muttered. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to SovereignShadow
Ikr xD
"Come on goblin lord, you're stronger than this, aren't you? At this rate you'll end up dying.." John said in a mocking tone. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrCommented
mc got cocky fast
"Heh.. That's a monster for you. Entertain me, will you?" Taunted John. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrCommented
A 12 year with trauma!?!?! The perfect romance interest for our mc :3
This paragraph has been deleted. - Joel_Amoako_71743yrReplied to Zuuhed
Exactly, how does he know what's strong and weak?
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She remembered a sentence, she ain't Eisenstein relax.
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