kirito when i read that name i think of kirito from sword art online yeah i dont really like that name because i cant think kirito as youre character i think as kirito in sword art online sorry

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i liked it i havent open some chapters yet because i need to save up for something but tyeres some mistakes im not saying that it need to be perfect im just saying that you still have a lot to go

i wonder what it look like when the eg hatches

i feel something is missing but i might able to find it if i continue reading it so yeah keep up the good work[img=coins][img=exp]

its nice i enjoy the story but you still need improvements