Yeah I get your point, I was just ranting a bit, I don’t even think I could genuinely become friends with a child and any fake attempts would probably be spotted by the Anbu anyway. I’m not even reading the novel anymore anyway, the dialogue doesn’t feel real.

I mean unless you were reborn with some OP cheat ability any person from this world no matter how much they would like to think so, would struggle to be more than a normal jonin if they were born in the Naruto world, and that’s assuming you have the will to stay normal after you begin killing people and don’t develop ptsd. Chances are all the strong adult ninjas everyone seems to think they can learn something from wouldn’t even give them the time of day, Fuinjutsu is probably not something you can just pick up after perusing a library and sage mode, even if you know about it requires an extremely rare talent. So if I was born in a realistic version of Naruto and I was a child, on the off chance that being friends with Naruto could provide the tiniest boost to my survivability, I’d do it.

Oh, it’s one of those types of MC’s…

I’ll give it a try

Aren’t those things genetic and not something you master? Or is this an AU?

It was a nice story and I enjoyed reading it, I wish you well in your future endeavours, I can’t continue reading since I’ve never seen or consumed a fate series but good luck with the novel 🫡

That mythology came out of nowhere 😂, I’ll admit I skipped most of it but I’m enjoying the story otherwise.

Kree* City

It’s was a cool concept and great story, but it just became boring when he decided to do all that religion stuff, I get it was for his own benefit and he had other plans, but I thought we were going for a an adventure type thing in space learning about his connection to the light dimension, maybe light kingdom building with his knee city where he developed it. I have nothing against where you’re taking the story from here, but I found myself skimming the chapters after this happened as it wasn’t interesting to me anymore. Best of luck with the writing, it’s just not for me.

Probably because he was using his own magic system which is still a work in progress to contain her and not one of his op familiars, just the space one would have been enough to contain her 🫡

I’ve read upto around chapter 60 and I’ve been enjoying it so far, but it is extremely slow paced while at the same time being fast paced in the mcs growth, I don’t have anything against that, but I’m going to have to take a break from reading till you have like 200 chapters out or something in case it’s dropped. He’s still 6 years old right now. Anyway good story, looking forward to more.

Really enjoying the story so far, don’t have a lot of criticism, just showing support 🫡

Might wanna remove this 💀

If it helps the original author has started a sequel series on ff.net

I think it’s kreel a hydra agent from the agents of shield tv show

Respects his sensei ***

I have no complaints about your updating stability and writing quality, and the story and world building is decent. The problems begin with the way you’ve been handling the MC, I get that he’s a genius and all, but having him kill someone when he’s 2 is a bit much, that and being encouraged to do it by an uzumaki seems a bit out of character. Also this is just another fanon with a hate boner for hurizen where he knows about danzo doing experiments and brushes off 8000 people dying in them as it was nothing, nevermind its established that he respected his senses and was disgusted by orochimaru simply resurrecting hashirama, and Mito being okay with the idea of resurrecting past Shinobis also doesn’t sit right with me, at the end of the day this is just my personal opinion, it’s still well written and will probably be entertaining as long as you aren’t too attached to how the characters were portrayed in the show.

Got Uni assignments piled up, I’ll start releasing again tomorrow 👍

I get what you’re saying, I might have not captured the explanation the show showed, thanks for pointing it out

They’re genetically engineered humans made from knee experiments, they have settlements on both earth and the moon, I’m taking my interpretation from the agents of shield show, so he’s from the settlement called afterlife