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Review Detail of MorTemTK in Vex (Man of Steel × MCU)

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MorTemTK
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It’s was a cool concept and great story, but it just became boring when he decided to do all that religion stuff, I get it was for his own benefit and he had other plans, but I thought we were going for a an adventure type thing in space learning about his connection to the light dimension, maybe light kingdom building with his knee city where he developed it. I have nothing against where you’re taking the story from here, but I found myself skimming the chapters after this happened as it wasn’t interesting to me anymore. Best of luck with the writing, it’s just not for me.

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Vex (Man of Steel × MCU)

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