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Omkar_More_3591

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2020-10-12 JoinedGlobal
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    great brother . U really made us wait though 🙂

    Ch 167 Seidou
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    Diamond no Ace : The Pitcher Returns
    Anime & Comics · zwaardijzer
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    Omkar_More_35911yr
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    let's not start with the story , the chs are pathetically short and no concrete plot in each ch it's like he is cutting down every ch into 4 parts and updating.... improve upon this in your next chs or story

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    I, who reincarnated become undead
    Fantasy · Black_Bolt_
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    The story has a preview of 20chapters he is taking 10 ch for explaining his mc powers wtf. I do not hate slow paced works but this just too much, it decreases the connection with th novel and adds useless word count

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    The Only Fuel Is Using The D.
    Realistic · pujimaki
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  • Omkar_More_3591
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    I can never understand why you want mc to be a sophisticated idiot trying to show his hypocrisy with a idiot face. a world where law is nothing but a tool in hand of powerful you want mc to a strong slave under it right. what to say as expected of you huh!

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    Ultimate Marvel System
    Anime & Comics · Imbreak
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  • Omkar_More_3591
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    this is one of the worst fanfics of Naruto I have read as it left a bad aftertaste at ch 27...bro wtf mc and root ...what the f*** are you imagining

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    The Senju Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Bob_Kizmet_5542
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    Omkar_More_35913yr
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    exp exp expppppp

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    Rise of Myriad Magic Emperor
    Fantasy · Evernightlord
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