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annederxee3yrPostedThe story is fine, I suggest writing the chapters neatly: fix the grammar and punctuation, the number of words per chapter should be precise and the conversations; make it straight to the point and useful. I hope my review helps and motivates you to write at your best! Good luck, Jagriti! You can do this! I'll continue reading your masterpiece đ
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ooof.. that's mean :(
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interesting
I enter the school corridor, tugging unto my sweater as I pass the sea of Balenciaga's and Prada's. They have their designer outfits on and are grouped into cliques, no doubt talking about which country they visited over the weekend or which store they splurged thousands of dollars in. I bet they've never worked a day in their life yet they lavishly spend money like it is nothing but paper. - annederxee3yrCommented
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"Why did she shout?" Chris asked. Allyson chuckled. "She shouted all her problems at the lighthouse. Man, My ears are still ringing from all those noise." She clarified. - annederxee3yrCommentedCh 1 Introduction
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haha the bird is cute and adorable at the same time funny XD
"Search yourself you lowly servant!!This is not a big trouble for you to find the foods right.Go on and bring some for me as well or else.....I think you understand and now go away shoo,shooo!!!",shouted the bird with its small beak which looks adorable for me but I took his warning seriously. - annederxee3yrCommented
look at you now look at me, ugh! XD
Ethan just nodded, Even if it he's not sure about what she said. He can't help to smile. "Alright, I'll look at you." He murmured. - annederxee3yrCommented
like a mushroom XD
"Yes, she's my cousin I'm talking about. The girl who suddenly disappear and appear from nowhere." Allyson explained. - annederxee3yrCommented
hmm anne
"By the way, Gray. I invited Anne." Allyson informed making Gray arch an eyebrow. "Anne?" He asked. - annederxee3yrCommented
haha idiot fish face XD
Five hours had past and I fell asleep during my meditation.I woke up and now it was morning and the ray of the sun almost blinded my eyes."AAARRRGGHHH MY EYES,the power of god of light is to powerful for me to fight againt it"I shouted as I roll on the tatami.Meanwhile the bird still watching me and I look at it and almost had heart attack.I look at the bird and the bird look at me.I move to right and left and the bird following my moves with its eyes."Hehehe I got new fans" I looked at the bird and said it while blushing.Suddenly the bird had a disgusted face on it and speak"No I am not going to be your fans idiot fish face!"then the bird fly away."....huh what happened did the bird says something,no it could not happen.... right?"I ask my self. - annederxee3yrCommented
waaaahhhh!!!
"I do... But not in the way as I like you." Allyson replied. - annederxee3yrCommented
wow, anne[img=recommend]
" Sorry, I found the hot owner. And he's no joke." Anne informed making the blonde furrow her forehead. - annederxee3yrCommented
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ehe handsome <3
"I know I'm handsome, But if you won't stop staring I might melt." Ethan said calmly while adjusting the helmet on Lauren. "Handsome? Where?" Lauren mocked the boy while looking around. "Tss! Hop in already." Ethan said, Lauren chuckled. It's obvious that he's annoyed.