Needs a little more work on the grammar and spelling. The book itself is good, the vocabulary is well enough. Could use a a bit more narration/description of setting but overall a solid book. Good job author!
Sukyna_Katamba
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thanks tread and I am so great ful just here reading your book
Tread_zan:a bit*
Thanks a trillion times its so great