so far you have a really good story here. Im looking forward to you updating more. keep up the good work editing to. you have a really good plot line as well.

I like the derversity of the characters personalities. Please keep up the good work. You also have a excellent plot line. I'm look forward to seeing where you take us reader's with this story.

Thank you!😇 Your review is appreciated 💛

I really like this story and can't wait to read more. When I have time, your story is well written. Please keep up the great work, im excited to read more.

I think your story has great potential, it need's some editing here and their. please continue updating this story :) I'm looking forward to it 😊

Thank you! I plan on updating very soon 🥰

Thank you so much for your honesty! I only hope to grow as a author and to learn how to tell my stories better. Constructive criticism helps so much💕

I really like your story! I see alot of potential with your novel and story line. I like how you let the MC express how they feel. Keep up the great work.

Thank you! I love constructive criticism, how would I get any better with out it 😅 I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.

Thank you 😊 Gramer is my weakest point. Im working on it, soon I will try out grammerly app. I love constructive criticism 😇

Thank you so much! It's so encouraging reading to read your comment and everyone else's.🥰🤗

This story is written by a very talented author 👏 I love your attention to detail and how you describe the MC. Please keep uo the great work😇

I very much enjoyed your story line and the MC in this novel! Please keep up the great work. You have a very interesting plot going on and I cant wait to read more.

I enjoy a good romance novel everyonce in awhile 🤗 This story has awesome editing and a great storyline. Im excited to see where this story goes next. I will be adding this story to my library 😇

A few grammer errors here and their. Also could use some editing but otherwise I think you have alot of potential here, with your story line! Its very interesting, please keep up the good work👍

Great story line 👏 and plot. Im interested to see how you continue this story. Please keep updating and the great work.. 😇 I think you have a nice story here.

This story has alot of emotions in it and I love it! please continue this story 🙏 You have alot of potential here. Im excited to read more.

I love how you describe the FL in your story with such great detail. You have alot of talent and potential here 😇 please keep up the great work.

I like that I can relate to the MC. This story has a very nice story line to it. Keep up the great work! Excited to see whag else you come up with next.

I enjoyed how easy it was to picture what was going on in your story as I read along. Please keep up the great work. Your very talented and I can't wait to read more when I have time to.