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You are actually really good at writing fight scenes! One of the qualities of a good fight scene, is minimal decription, which you do perfectly. For all those who do not understand I will explain; a poorly written fight scene tries to explain every detail and not allow the readers mind to work. A good fight scene lets the readers mind fill in the gaps. Keep up the great work Author-sama, and have a nice day!

I actually laughed when I read that!

Heyo job hype! Good chapter Author-sama and hope you have a fantastic day!

This book is very good, some reasons why below; 1. The writing quality is very high, and there are little to no grammatical errors in this book 2. The characters are realistic and act in plausible ways 3. The story is good and not forced in any way 4. The MC slowly losing his humanity is done very well 5. Fight scenes are good

Ah, ah! I see you little question mark!

Yeah let me just do that…

Thanks for the confirmation! Hyped for academy arc (although this arc is really good and I kinda want it to go on longer), and I’m happy that we can meet some friends, both old and new! Have a great day Author-sama!

Hope you get the job! Have a great day Author-sama!

TLDR at bottom + Question for Author-sama I haven’t written a comment for a little while, so this shall mark my triumphant return! *clears throat* ahem… This chapter uses the classic idea of “The Hero’s Journey” to showcase where this segment is heading. Specifically it is the “Loss of Innocence” step. Normally it is not taken so litterally, however for how our character is and acts, this is good character development. I personally have always been a fan of Assassin Classed people, so this segment may be biased slightly. Ezio is a very interesting character so far, and also sheds a small amount of light on the leader of Lont, Will’s grandfather. I hope that his assassin training goes well, but that his character doesn’t change too much, otherwise I feel that the story will be disrupted. Overall, this has been a great arc, and some great character development. TLDR: Great arc, Great development, and Looking forward to the next chapters Question for Author-sama: Academy arc yes or no? Just want to meet back up with the girls turned boys at the academy, and some stuff to happen. Keep up the great work Author-sama and have a great day!

I have only a few things to say. I had a smile on my face the entire time The characters felt real Its honestly a good story The face slapping is actually good So overall, read this story, you wont regret it