Everything was happening too quickly to the point her head spun.
Where is my cane?
"How are you sure they are the ones?" Genevieve wanted him to take a minute to think. Everything was happening too quickly that her head was spinning.Â
Unfortunately, that war was coming their way because the Mafioso would rather end his life than lose him in their organization. He knew so much and there was no out. He's either with them or he's dead.Â
This is a nice book abt a set of twins that got separated and all. I love your character design, story development and ur writing style. Just some typos on ur early chaps u need to edit...
Other than that, it is promising