ohh you took me the wrong way i wasn't mad no worries

if you are saying my story is bad i am aware and i'm trying my best to fix it it will take a while cause i am also busy with IRL work

please DO NOT advertise any story on the review section!

i should thank you in fact haha i am new i just joined a few weeks ago and i do know how well "bad" my story is that's why i need critics like this a lot i will put my time on fixing my chapters for now and i hope the next time you stop by you will be satisfied again thank you

oh trust me it's real look it up

hello thank you for being the first person that gives me a critic review english is not my mother language so please tolerate me for being horrible at English but beside that I'll take all your critics into consideration thank you so much i will do my best to fix my way of writings as well

i have read way too many vampire genre to find interest in the genre but this story caught my attention. i love the world setting and how the plot progresses keep up the good work

i really like this story the world setting are very interesting and hilarious i love how you squeezed in FIFA in chapter 3 haha... i haven't found many flaws for the past 10 chapter i read this is definitely a very good story keep it up

dang this is a really good story i feel like watching a movie, the word "betray" really hits me cause I've experience it many times haha... I really like the writings it feels unique and the plot are interesting keep it up

i really like the settings and its a really great story too bad im out of stones so i can't vote the aspect of the story is pretty unique i like it

thank you for your support i'm happy that you liked my story

this story has most of the things i like fantasy,romance, time travel my gods this is amazing i love it it might be weird that i like BL even though im a guy but dont judge XD im here for the story and its flawless 9/10 keep it up

i really like the background and the story development i always have interest on wars and such yet i havent really found any story that made im interested in it this is by far the first one im interested in i haven't read all the chapters but by far i love it