Kei_Zhanyu
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Hey author, I think that your writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work!đ I hope you can post a little more because I want to see what you do with the characters. Although this was a school project as you said in the syno**is, I hope you could include some more, say world building and more depth to the charctersâ personalities, this is because I personally found that the three witches that you wrote about were a little hard to distinguish between. Although your writing has a few flaws. I didnât find too many blatantly obvious grammatical errors and also your use of imagery was good as it allowed for me to imagine the scene youâre describing well. All in all I think that you should keep up the good work!