Review Detail of Kei_Zhanyu in The Treads of Fate Hang in Witches’ Hands

Hey author, I think that your writing is pretty good. Keep up the good work!👍 I hope you can post a little more because I want to see what you do with the characters. Although this was a school project as you said in the syno**is, I hope you could include some more, say world building and more depth to the charcters’ personalities, this is because I personally found that the three witches that you wrote about were a little hard to distinguish between. Although your writing has a few flaws. I didn’t find too many blatantly obvious grammatical errors and also your use of imagery was good as it allowed for me to imagine the scene you’re describing well. All in all I think that you should keep up the good work!