well written so far. and highly entertaining. let's all hope the author continues. only true downside so far is the stories is a little slow on plot development but hey it only has 5 chapters so far.

excellent writing. well thought of story with much potential.. down side. author drags out every single thing into multiple chapters made it to chapter 18 before the excessive details and filler paragraphs finally did me in. if you are very very very patient it might be a great read

completely destroyed anything about the super gene story. waste of time in my opinion.

over all iam enjoying the different take on a good story. very inventive and we'll thought put. hope the updates come quickly and often

poor grammar poor grammar poor grammar poor grammar

overall a very well thought out and designed story. definitely worth the read. excellent work from the author

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I have gotten more entertainment from being beaten bloody then this poor excuse for a book. randomly jumping story. poor word choice. and at chapter20 still not even one interesting thing

could have been a great story. but the author has mistaken a single paragraph for a chapter leaving the word count and story development rather low

what happens did the Author drop this book? or dis life just get rather busy? either way it is a shame I was looking forward to another well designed book

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

has potential but the author has severe issue with staying on topic wasting many pages and effort to keep adding side stories that completely off set the chance of this becoming a successful book

my thoughts are simple. you obviously have ADD..

practice using the space key

why waste so many chapters on side characters? first time writing?

the author obviously has high potential. truelly original ideas and thought out design.. down side is he lets the stories jump around like a baboon on meth

way to many full chapters wasted on back story / side story of side characters

has the potential to become a great book. well thought out plot. interesting twists of character. nicely done background story. however the other switches characters faster the a ADHD child does flavors in a candy store

what a waste of a potentially great stories. switching from character to character so frequently has rendered this story non readable for me.