Our hero dies after defeating his main enemy and his soul return back to Earth. He have no goals so he become a otaku... Meteoroids crash onto the Earth land, and corpses start rising from their graves. Zombie roam the lands and mutate but for Feng Mei killing them is the same as crushing ants. Hell overlaps, gods counter attack. In the midst of the war between Gods and Demons, watch how Feng Mei plays them all. A will ancient, promise forgotten, prophecy of Evil, heavens dead is possible! All lives as pawn, a game of chess, a game played by placing one own's life at stake. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If you like it, Then motivate me by voting with power stone Thanks!
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There is a programming error in the system called the world and a guy is a bug. God has volunteered to do experiments on him and after the successful experiment, he is reincarnated to a fantasy world filled with adventure, mystery, and magic. This is the story of a man who was reincarnated as a 15-year-old boy after a crazy experiment from God. A tale of how he restarted his life in the new world and how he became a Hero from Zero. Buy me a coffee: https://ko-fi.com/brpever Rules: 1) Usually, multiple chapters will be published every week. I will let you guys know if I am taking a break. 2) For every 300 powerstones, 1 extra chapter will be released during the weekend 3) I am willing to work on suggestions and comments from my readers. 4) The credit of cover picture goes to Aldnonymous and his friend Feni fenol which was released under Creative Commons Attribution 3.0 Unported license on Wikimedia Commons and was modified by me (author). Discord: https://discord.gg/NChfKfz Note: This story is meant to be a fun isekai series. If you don't like such series or if you are looking for something too serious to read, this is probably not the one for you. You can try my other book 'Rising Against Fate' if you like a little more darker and serious type.
Bored Gamer in Other Worlds. A spoiled brat journeys in mystical worlds and beyond. * * * Author's Patreon - https://www.patreon.com/Immovable87 PayPal Donation - https://www.paypal.com/cgi-bin/webscr?cmd=_s-xclick&hosted_button_id=GX29VUN9C7M78&source=url Discord: https://discord.gg/mXMRjzF
A hero defeating the demon lord dies after his victory. Seeing as his time has come to an end, he felt great regret for all the things he couldn't do. As death takes him he closes his eyes and opens them, as a baby in a brand new world. Reincarnated with his past life's memories he will do his best to live a life with no regrets.
The past is the sea of the present, and it's the shrine of the future. No one knows that the master of chaos, the king of death, and the envoy of hell. Is sittings on a throne of skulls as he watching the world in a deadly silence .. No one knew at the time that the past, present and future are a maze of amazement and shocks. Do not lower your head while you read so you Don't hurt yourself. when the hero of the story is the villain that the world is afraid of, when will the clock stop and announce the beginning of the end
In a place where Magic reigns supreme, what would our MC do as he finds himself being rejected by the world. This is the story of a boy who is unable to wield mana. After shaming his parents who are considered to be among the strongest Mages of the era. Our MC stands at the terrace of the School building planning to commit suicide. What has fate got stored in for our MC. Will he commit suicide ? If you want to know, join our MC as he struggles. ------------------------------------- All the characters and incidents in this story are imaginary. Please note that the chapter can be a bit slow. So please be a bit patient and read up to 50 chapter before making any opinion .......................... The Cover art is made by Valeriexx. Join the Discord : https://discord.gg/WTDaPfU DM me @ ReincarnatedSaint#2904 on Discord Support me : https://www.paypal.me/ReincarnatedSaint
After getting run over by a truck, Nile finds himself in the body of a man with the same name as himself. He soon realized that he had just been esekai'd or transmigrated into another world that was experiencing a Zombie Apocalypse for over two months already. Nile was rambling on how dangerous this world is. It turns out that the zombies were evolving, getting stronger every second. Nile was already at his wit's end when the 'System' butted to his rescue. He felt elated as he found out that humans could evolve too. And compared to other humans, his was even easier due to the System's help. Follow Nile as he ventured and come across different kinds of people and zombie in this Apocalypse World. Getting addicted to the notion of becoming stronger. Nile searches for zombies every day to kill and Level Up. ..... Early chapters are being re-edited. Sorry for the inconvenience. ..... This is a work of fiction. Names of people, places and events are all work of fiction. Contact me on Discord if you have something to ask. Neil_Ads#6616
Nero Valstine was a Level 799 Master Rank Digitizer in his previous life, titled as the Silver Death God who was feared across a mysterious VR World. He had been on a special Digital Quest hinting towards the revelation of the final treasure sought by many, a treasure that can grant any of its wielders wildest dreams. Moments away from accomplishing this task, a famed figure appeared and ended his hopes, giving him a fatal blow before stealing the artifact. Nero, who died with regret, and endless rage was sent into the cycle of rebirth to start over anew, can he achieve his greatest wish and desires once more? Or does fate has other plans? "To those who seek the greatest of all power, travel these lands and explore its endless boundaries." "To those who desire wealth beyond your imagination, venture this earth to unravel its endless riches." "To those who seek the unknown and universe's greatest mysteries, enter this realm and your answers will be found..." "Whatever you desire, so long as you venture this world and find my treasure, then all your wishes will come true..." With this resonant cry across the heavens, thus was the start of the age of Digitzers. ===Important Note=== This story is apart of the Spirity Awards Contest, if you really like it and would love to see it win, please feel free to show your support by dropping by a review, comments and even power stones, I shall greatly appreciate it. ===Release Details=== Daily release - 1 or 2 chapters (9:am - 12:pm) Mass release (Sundays)- Chapters Determined by Main Power Ranking 1 Extra Chapter (Top - 100) 2 Extra Chapter (Top - 50) 3 Extra Chapter (Top - 15) 4 Extra Chapters (Top - 5) ===Subscribe to my Mailing List to get exclusive access to works==== https://www.subscribepage.com/shadowsfinger_copy ===More of my works on Webnovel === ARIFT - https://www.webnovel.com/book/16131271505970705 LevelUp Family - https://www.webnovel.com/book/17397607105687205 Want to show some support? Drop by a Review and a Power Stone. You can also send me a Gift or Paypal Me :) https://www.paypal.me/shadowsfinger Want to read some more of my personal works? Check out below! https://www.patreon.com/ShadowsFinger https://www.amazon.com/dp/B07C7912KX Follow me on Twitter & Facebook & Discord: Discord - https://discord.gg/ffVV7cV Twitter -https://twitter.com/ShadowsFinger Facebook - https://www.facebook.com/ShadowsFingers/
Brion was just a normal college student. Since childhood, he was interested in the abilities of "Mind Power" and "Mind", and although the people around him looked at him with the "crazy" eye, he continued to work on these abilities. But he never succeeded in his life and died as a result of a disease. When he woke up, he was in a cave and soon realized he had a system, and at the same time, he realized that he had come to a fantastic universe. And only the system tailored for his own "Mind" abilities and only belong to him. It was glory given to him to realize his dreams that he couldn't do in his previous world. - - https://www.instagram.com/krizantemauthor/ ( for questions), after 2k followers I will post daily 2 chapter to book
On earth, there is one man who ruled every game that has ever been created - Zeke Elwood. A high school dropout turned gamer who has lived the rest of his life playing every kind of game. His fame increased like wildfire as he'd always prove to be the strongest, using the most unconventional methods. Life on earth became boring for him at this point until - an unknown game developer sent him the game called "Mythos". This sent him to another world, clearing a trial created by the three major gods and, getting chosen as their new champion. With all that took place, Zeke is given a [Gamer's System]. One which he'll use to beat all the records set by the humans who have been chosen before him.
In the World of Eldeon, whereas Magic and Magical beast exist. Kiro was summoned into this unknown realm with the help of the SYSTEM. He strived his way to overcome the tribulation of this new life. Follow him on the journey to this isekai-world. * * * Have some suggestions? Join my discord channel. https://discord.gg/mKypCxc *Disclaimer* I do not own the cover photo. *Source* Pinterest: Kel, Holy Marksman
In the year 3650, humanity has conquered the universe, only to find out that they were the only intelligent species in existence. With the limit technology had reached, they yearned for more. More convenience and more life, so they started the project known as B.S. which was the process of breaking through the shackles that limited us while it also protected us from outside dangers. Right after 100 years, after the project B.S. had successfully been completed, monsters of terrifying strength intruded in their universe, resulting in a war that continued for a thousand years. After facing these monsters, something seemed to awaken within their body as they unlocked supernatural powers by absorbing the magical stone inside the monster's body. Dignity might have been important in the mortal world, but within this era where supernatural reign supreme, would dignity be worth something? As for people who are disappointed or feel appalled by the grammar at the start, you could keep it in you’re library to wait for the edit. So please be patient. Read the auxiliary chapter first. Join discord https://discord.gg/U3ufZ6 Not my picture. If the owner wish to take it down, please contact me.
"I can't die even if I try," Ryder Flynn was one of the strongest Magic Knights. But his life was turned upside down when he was killed because of a glitch in the game. He gained a system and transferred back in time to the time he started playing Divinity. Things take a strange turn when he becomes the King of the strongest demons in the Virtual Realm. That was not enough as he also gained a godly item inside the game, which basically made him immortal. The skill gave him the power that every time he dies, the time rewinds by 1 day. But why did that item follow him to the real world? Life is full of mystery and problems. From the small obstructions like Ancient cultivation families of the real world to the bigger problem that was his own fierce Demon Army in the virtual realm and even bigger problems that was his own system. Why is the virtual world so realistic? Is it really just a game or something more? Warning: Read the Pinned Review by me ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Buy me a coffee and support me on Ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/deangel Patreon: Patreon.com/DeAngel Join my discord:https://discord.gg/2AGkydg
[Read the auxiliary chapter first] Grand Elder pondered for a while before posing out his answer, "Aryan, have you read any history books on the old ways of cultivation." "What?!!" “Ah, how to say…. The answer you gave is invalid in this era. That cultivation system you are talking about is a two-millennium old history. I don't know how you came to know about those, but it's better to erase them from your memory.” ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This is what Aryan got to hear from his gramps, on his fifth birthday. Wang Huang, a genius venerable cultivator from the ancient era, died in an unforeseen accident while searching for his path to immortality. After being stuck in a dark space for an unknown period, he took rebirth as the first son of Aditya and Anisa. Till the age of five, he was fantasizing of becoming an overpowered MC with a harem filled with seductive, voluptuous and alluring ladies. But little did he know at that time, that the world of cultivation has taken many twists and turns over the past two millennia, and his past knowledge of cultivation is outdated!!! Even though Aryan past life knowledge became trash in that new era, he didn’t give up on his dream of becoming an overpowered MC and continued his journey. But again, little did he know, that the upcoming future events, starting from Cultivation, followed by Cross-dressing, Sci-Fi, Cultivation Technique……… Will keep on crushing him and his world view!! Original Art Credit goes to YGS, Lityrden & Demu.
Martin became an orphan when he lost his family in a mysterious accident at a young age. Although he was orphaned, it did not affect him because of the mental problems he had. When he grows up to a certain age, he joined the world of crime and began to improve himself.within 10 years he became one of the most dangerous serial-killers known in the dark world. He also started killing people for money. But he died of an explosion on his last mission. He also had a system to help him in this new world. A soulless and emotionless serial killer from the old world had to give life in a fantastic world. But what he didn't know is that the powers that were possessed in this world would change itself. - You can try another book of mine here , it newly started just check it out - https://www.webnovel.com/book/16727674105007605/The-Mind-God#review - https://www.instagram.com/krizantemauthor/ ( for questions), after 2k followers I will post daily 2 chapter to book
Galactic Technological Library that is the access point for different races of the universe to exchange knowledge, choose an ordinary boy from the earth as its librarian. How a boy with no ambition would use this chance given to him. He is given the right to access all kinds of technical knowledge which has yet to discover by the earth and interact with different races that come to the Library seeking knowledge. Follow the adventures of Fu Yan while he uses this knowledge to become the strongest man on earth and travel the different worlds as a librarian to collect books. join my discord server:https://discord.gg/yj28kcb support me=www.patreon.com/sakakoi24
Aizen, an ultra-genius scientist finally succeeded in making a breakthrough in science and technology by creating the world's first Super Artificial Intelligence. But as if fate had another will, he died with a smile on his face after completing his perfect masterpiece, leaving his life's ultimate work that will continue to evolve with time to the world for the hope of an extraordinary and unimaginable future. "Welcome back, Master Aizen." That was the first word Aizen heard when he opened his eyes. He awoke before a beautiful woman who was familiar to him. Axel, an avatar of the Impartial Artificial Intelligence System or introduced to the public as [Axel Goddess] finally managed to revive her long-lost master alongside his daughter, Ana. His short sleep to welcome the morning turned out to be eternal sleep that was less eternal, a thousand years had passed since his death. Faced with a problem that even Axel could not solve which forced the creation of a second civilization on Mars, while humanity on Earth was on the verge of extinction because the deadly mutations caused living organisms to grow violent by changing their bodies and abilities. With a super hot Artificial Intelligence that finally gets a perfect human body, as well as a clingy and spoiled daughter who is formerly estranged on his side, Aizen must use his intelligence to find a way to save his home planet which turned out to be very complicated and ends up getting them involved in it.
Lin Fan was transported to another world, into the body of a normal disciple. Given the environment he was in, Lin Fan faced the risk of being killed at any time. However, something was out of place. Starting the system. Ding: You’ve received an infinite level buff: Immortality From then on, everything changed. To Lin Fan, if anyone could kill him, he would concede defeat. Otherwise, he would turn them into mincemeat. To his opponents, they have given up because it was impossible to kill Lin Fan. And the synopsis is done! Let’s keep it short and simple. Warning: This book contains happiness, silliness, and a main character who enjoys acting cool.
Our 14 year old protagonist John has lived his life in an honest manner. After losing his parents, he strives to become a man that they would be proud of. After an accident he is reincarnated into another world as an orphan. Having started off with little to no support and information. How will he deal with this situation? Join me on discord: https://discord.gg/nhvKh9q Illustration by: rean_kidd ------------------------------- After meeting a certain power ranking goal, chapters will be mass released according to the goal the i set. Current goal: Top 100: 5 Chapter mass release Warning: Contains Violence and blood
Riley Petesgeralt is your everyday suburban high-schooler by day, and an avid gamer by night, easily cracking the top 50 player charts in the world’s top played MMORPG, World of Legends. However, after a spiritual encounter, his life is turned upside down. Both worlds collide, and now, his life is a roleplaying game? Follow Riley as he embarks on an adventure in adapting his new abilities to his everyday life, where he discovers "life" may not be as normal as it seems.
In his past incarnation, Lu Xuan was the youngest Celestial Lord that the universe has ever seen! An accidental rebirth brought him back to a thousand years before, where the Earth had just begun its spiritual reawakening. When he stepped onto the way of cultivation for a second time, he swore to rewrite all injustices suffered in his past life, and defeat all enemies that dare stand in his way! Let invincibility be his cultivation and the path he treads. In this life, it is his destiny to be invincible!
"After waking up, Ning Tian was surprisingly reborn as a small sapling. Before he could react, a powerful system appeared, explaining the reason. Because of the advent of the system, directly the planet began to enter the age of spiritual revival. The spirit revived and all things began to rise. The beasts began to roar with excitement and bloodthirstiness, shaking the mountains and rivers, and countless human strongmen appeared in droves to fight for their country and glory... However, in the middle of a deep mountain, an emerald green sapling with a huge life force rose directly from the ground. Ning Tian, who possesses the system, can evolve infinitely and can eventually become the god of trees. And the fruit he produces can give the man a strange gift, even the evolution of the beast, the essence of life in his body can make all things crazy, and his own spirit can nourish all things."
This is a work of fiction, any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! (Even the country in the story is just the author's fantasy as the author never visited those countries in the story) Armipotent is an archaic adjective meaning "strong in battle." Basically, it refers to someone who is physically tough in war. Originally, it was used to refer to the Roman god of war, Mars. ===================== Tang Shaoyang, an orphan who dropped out of the middle school to fight on the street as he found out school was useless for a penniless orphan like him. Tang Shaoyang dropped out of his school, fighting on the street, and made a name for himself. Berserker Tang from Youyouliucun. Afterward, Dragon Wing triad recruited him and everything was good for him. Even though the public deemed him as a tumor of society, Tang Shaoyang was having a decent life. Until one day, everything changed as an absurd and strange game started. "... Game starts! Stage one: Survival for The Fittest!" After the game started, zombies appeared out of nowhere. ... Ding! "You have killed 1000 zombies less than 24 hours since the game started! You gained 3 Talents!" Dong! "You may choose 3 Talents! please choose carefully!" Tang Shaoyang held his chin and mused what Talent he had to choose. "With Zombies appear everywhere, I need an infinite strength... this is one, I still need to choose 2 Talents more..." Then a lewd smile formed on his lips. "I want an infinite strength, charm and charisma to conquer women, and the last one, I want to upgrade my **** so I can please my women!" After saying this, Tang Shaoyang laughed aloud. "Hahaha, there's no way such talent exists... ehhhhh?!!!" Ding! Dong! "3 Talents are consumed! You have been granted Divine Body! Good Luck, Gamer Tang Shaoyang!" Tang Shaoyang immediately checked the detail of Divine Body. After a brief silence, he muttered unbelievably. "Such Talents really exist..." Note: I don't own the cover. If the creator wants me to take down the cover or put credit, please notify me by replying to my review at the Review section.
RPG STYLE NOVEL, MC DOING QUEST, KILLING MONSTERS, LEVELING UP, GAINING SKILL, AND etc... SYSTEM Deity, a newly invented modern gadget that helps humans to breakthrough their limiters. WARNING: THIS NOVEL IS A HIDDEN GOLD!!! Our protagonist Yman Talisman was a young man, 17 years old, and an orphan. After he found out that he had a Hollow Cell symptom, he rejoiced. Now there was a way for him to cure his ill sister. But on the day of evaluation exams, because of an incident, he was late and only managed to get the weakest magic skill among the rest. How could he fight monster to monster when his magic was the weakest and no used for fighting. No group wanted to let him joined them. In order to cure his sister, he had no choice but to fight monsters alone. When he finds out about a certain item that able to heal any kind of illness, he left the city and delves into adventures to search for it. Warning: If you are a fan of a novel that an MC is op at an early chapter, then it might be not your cup of tea. The MC in this novel will slowly build up his character from attitude - to - power. For those who wish to read where MC not bullied much, you can skim to chapter 30 or 50. Message me at discord if you have questions and suggestions: CloudSky#4375
What will you do if you are reincarnated in another world full of wonders and magic? Of course, you want to be a Hero or a Villain! The problem is our Main Character chose not to become any of those, but he cannot avoid trouble!!! Meet Wreck, an average dude trying to live peacefully in a different world. Join him as he explores and accidentally establishes his legacy in this Medieval Fantasy World!!!! Uploads every day 7 chapters every week 1500-2000 words every chapter LOVE Y'ALL
How would you feel living a life of absolute misery and pain? What would think when the sister of a girl you were falsely accused of killing breaks into your home and kills you by accident. Even the Gods are unsettled with what humanity has become, so what do they offer John? A: Reincarnation B: Power C: Revenge D: The choice to start apocalypses throughout the three universes. or E: All of the Above You know where this is going.
Xu Ming was the son of the Prince of Heavens who was supposed to have a peaceful and enriching life, but it all turned upside down when a betrayal happened that took everything from him. What no one knew was that Xu Ming had the bloodline of a sealed ancient god who created the universe. The world filled with gods, demons and immortal cultivators will tremble when the Ancient finally Awakens for his revenge... Warning: Volume 1(Chapter 1 to 60 is an important prologue of the story that sets it up. The main story of Xu Ming starts at volume 2 ________________________________________ Note: Shared Universe with my first novel 'Rise of the Demon God' , so you will get to see some loved characters and fun intersections. You don't need to read both to enjoy either one of the novels though. Release Schedule: 7-14 chapters per week. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Buy me a coffee and support me on Ko-fi : https://ko-fi.com/deangel Patreon: Patreon.com/DeAngel Join my discord:https://discord.gg/2AGkydg
Humans with best genes supposedly became mindless zombies in a single second all due to failed evolution. Zombies evolved from level 1 to 2 on the first day of Apocalypse. Animals evolved to become intelligent and started a war against humans for oppressing them for ages. •°•°•°•°•° A world in which zombies, Intelligent Evolved Animals are just the start of the apocalypse as something far worse is heading humanity's way. "Can this world get any crazier??" Jason asked as he looked at the sky unknowingly jinxing all the remaining human population on earth... Follow Jason and his group as they fight against all odds and help humanity survive something far worse than a Zombie Apocalypse. Discord Server for Apocalypse Remnant`: Discord Link: https://discord.gg/jkHrRWd Support me to pump out more chapters: https://ko-fi.com/flickeringflame
Shaymon, the man who has achieved the apex of dark magic, is framed as being a Demon King and is killed. 'I will not let it end like this!' He finally achieves new life but reality was cruel. Being born after 500 years, he was born as the descendent of his rival, the Sword Emperor!
After 50 years of being in the position of Hwacheon Clan Leader, Kang-hyuk, widely renowned as 'The Dragon' retires. Nearing his eight year of retirement, at the age of ninety-eight, he experiences the spiritual phenomenon of 'reverse-ageing', causing his body to return to a state of youthfulness. With his new found youth and vigour, he sets out to fulfill his deceased brother's last wish to be a teacher. From martial legend of Moorim to an Invincible teacher, Kang-hyuk's foray into academic life as a horticulture teacher begins! Set in the mystical land of Moorim, with plenty of action, comedy and cultivation!
I have failed but I will try again! There is no more failure in my second life! The 72 dungeons that have appeared on earth and their owners. As well as the awakened people. I am the hunter that devours them all.
What is it beyond death? A question that will never be answered until one meets with the death itself, isn't it? "You are a disappointment." "I'll always be by your side." "Have you gone mad!? You useless trash!" "Believe in yourself as I believe in you." Thousands of scenarios and dramas in his life, but he stood, as he walked one step at a time. He never feared going forward for the worst that could happen is his death. 'Perhaps.. I shouldn't have been born... ' A thought that always haunted his mind, for he thought he's unfit for this world. 'But.. I don't wanna die either..' And in his last moment, he heard a voice, a whisper that came into his head. "Do you?" ****** hai, I'm joining the spirity contest and this is my new story. if you like how the story so far, please give me your support by leaving a review or some power stones for me, thank you!
Millions of years in the future, the Sun collapsed, and the existence of the human race on Earth was about to end. Yet, the arrival of the Xis, an omnipotent alien race, saved the human from mass extinction and forced them to live under the surface of the airless, dying planet. Their act wasn't selfless though. The Xis forced the human race to atone for their sins against the Earth by sending them on a journey to explore their ancient bloodlines. They created an artificial solar system with a planet for each of the ancient pantheons, and divided the remains of the human race according to their ancestors. Dag, an earthling kid, is about to undergo the test of his bloodline through an alien machine called "Temporum". The Temporum would send him to the Viking planet, where he will discover an eerie connection with the ancient Gods and learn to wield part of their power. However, he will soon find out that his bloodline hides far more than that... 6 pantheons 6 destination planets A multitude of Gods and supernatural powers. One destiny to fulfill. P.S. This is my first novel. Comments and feedbacks are very welcome. I'm from Italy, so I'm constantly improving my writing skills. Good reading! ---------------------------------------- Weekly Milestone Goals: 800 Power Stones --> +1 Bonus Chapter 1K Power Stones --> +2 Bonus Chapters 2K Power Stones --> +3 Bonus Chapters ---------------------------------------- Support me on ko-fi: https://ko-fi.com/immanioripse Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/XxGKwxX Cover credits: Cosmas
This is a riotously fun novel. There's no other way to say it. The slightly stunted writing gives it charm, which works well with the comedic air. There is no doubt that it's a great story as well. There is a lot of context which makes the story feel real within the absurdity. I'm a sucker for both science-magic fusion and reincarnation, and this really ticks those boxes. The author is also posting super consistently. They're forging ahead with no sign of stopping! I recommend you strap in and follow on ASAP.
I think it is my second time I give 5 out 5. I rarely do it. However, this story just is that good. The author spills imagination all over the place. Sarcasm, humor, intensity, and even mystery. All cooked up in an apocalyptic plot. I wouldn't believe that it could work out but it does work o_O! There are some typos here and there but I wouldn't bother. If you get paid, then you can hire someone to proofread it. The story is rich enough to make you ignore some misspellings. I love the main character so far and hope the author would not trash him with some banality. He is too unique to be stained lol! I have no criticism. For one, I am a new author and second - the world background (which I am obsessed with, in general) rocks. You make a solid world and I become your fan! This is how it works with me lol. Good job. I will keep the story in my library even after the review. (:
Those who follow the path on Doomsday will not be losers. Choosing a path means a lot to a person whether he sees light green gardens or fire. If a man can maintain his humanity, consider that he has lived his life not in vain. The author has a beautiful style, the text block is exquisite. I hope the author will be able in his novel to show that a good person always remains such, so as not to be among the losers and see the fire.
This story got lot of potential, I had fun reading it....But I am greatly sadden by the horrendous grammar(especially improper commas), I had to shut down by brain to read it. If Author-san can fix/improve the grammar, readers might enjoy your novel more. P.S: You could edit the earlier chapters for move viewers.
An interesting beginning. Synopsis is also well written. 😊 Just some minor spacing issues like the start of many sentences have an extra space, so u can remove that. Writing quality is good and the choice of words used for description really gives a nice flow 👌 There are a little grammar issues. Im also a little rough in that area so can say that. Grammarly is a good option to make the basic corrections. Otherwise author has done a good job with the plot! Keep it up 👍😁