It was a really good read. Started off strong but towards the middle/ end started to feel rushed. It left some loose ends behind.

A great book ties in to the vampire system but only towards the end really in my opinion. I would and do recommend a second reading. Here’s to the next book.

Great book through out only complaint was the getting the names of characters wrong, misspelling words and other grammer issues but nothing really major.

What chapter/character did he receive the map from I forgot?

I really like this novel. The amount of detail is crazy and well thought out. That is a couple of reasons that I keep reading. The biggest issue that I have noticed in almost every chapter is the misspelled words and mixing up of different characters names. Neither are bad enough where it pulls away from the story and you can usually figure out what is meant with context clues. Sometimes you just have to make up your own sentence to fit due to the grammer/syntax making it so difficult. With this many characters I completely understand why it is happening and how difficult it must be to keep it all straight. I thought the editor would catch some of these since they’re pretty obvious or a reread of the chapter before submitting would help a lot. Another issue is when the characters have to “act” that’s really bad. I don’t feel like people would/could act that bad unless it was on purpose. So let me say it again. This novel is amazing even with the few issues that it has and I am really enjoying it. Thank you and keep up the great work.

OkY will do.

I really like this Novel. The amount of detail is crazy. That is one of the reasons I keep reading. But one of the biggest issues that keeps popping up in almost every chapter is mispelling words and the mixing up of different character names. It’s not bad enough where you can’t tell who the author means and figure it out but sometimes the grammer/syntax make it difficult. With this many different characters I completely understand how difficult it must be to keep it all straight. Also when the Character has to “act” thats really bad. I dont feel like people would act that bad unless it’s on purpose. So let me say again this novel is amazing and im really enjoying it. Thank you and keep up the great work.

That sucks.

Sadly chapter 85 and 86 are the same chapter word for word.

Right

This chapter is good but a little messed up but who hasnt wanted to do this.

I needed a new novel and this one is amazing. It has a nice flow to it, makes sense, keeps you interested and wanting to read more.[img=update]

I needed a new novel to read and this is great.

I wonder if he is actually going to be in that kingdom for long since he is the deamon prince.

I agree, I understand he had to get back to tour the palaces but still. Also wonder why he didnt just stop the thief when he saw he.

The grammer this in this chapter was pretty bad this time around. The chapter was still good and I enjoyed it but needed a little more polish.

Yea its the Fibonacci sequence minus the begining two numbers which are 0 and 1. Im more than okay with how the book is coming along. I really want more releases a week but not if theyre going to jeopardize quality. I know its hard to release more but if you could it would be super amazing.

His spending for the armor and black smith tools seemed to be off since he only had 150 gold coins. I believe that he spent Way more than that on just the armor.

Im really hoping this book keeps getting more chapters its really good. The logic is game like and the MC doesnt shy away from it but at the end theyve mentioned throughout the MC was in the military but it seems like the military forgot or didnt look up that fact even though electricity is still working.

The discord Url doesnt work and the writing could use a little bit of refinement with the syntax but the story is great. I can’t wait for more chapters to come out. I wish it was updated more lol.