ZeOwl
I like being interactive with the audience I have and asking questions, I think its fun to reply and read the replies I get. I generally try my best. I have a patreon visit maybe...patreon.com/ZeOwl
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Yeah, I'm reorganizing chapters. The way they were before irked me. So I'm sorting them basically with three google docs while editing them slowly.
Well, yes... but no. He get the ring that allows one to transform into werewolf.
it is the literal points you get into a skill. best example is when you are lock picking and break a pick you can see the exp bar go up. its those points. I just phrased it like how you type it into the console commands though.
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I couldn't think of anything clever okay!
The Mc is connecting Olaf to Ulfric who should die a vicious death.
You read something wrong, can you write a paragraph comment where this happens? The only person who reads the Journal is our MC. If you are right it was a typo and I'll fix it, but I am pretty sure you just read something wrong. In which I can still fix it to make it clearer.
They released skyrim on every console possible. In every form possible. It came out 2011 and in total there is 10 different versions of skyrim. Across 8 consoles(this is including PC). Which they still managed to milk more using the anniversary dlc for the SE version. The joke is that it is milked and in the story they are milking it more even in a completely new game. Though explaining this does kind of ruin the already kind of poor quality joke. I mean it isn't even technically a joke. I think it is considered a meta joke or anti joke? I'm not well-versed in comedy.
Buddy, friend, The Thalmor literally touching the college of winterhold, hunting blades, and for whatever reason got a guy trying to collect the dragon priest masks. The Thalmor would 100% find a way to fund the stormcloaks while still enforcing the Talos ban.
This is literally my character always. However I am gonna nerf archery hard for the MC.
Yup, Yup.
This is true! However I thought the joke about racial empowerment would be funny. Not to mention blessings is actually based a little on the Ordinator mod.
I thought about it and decided on more context. So a second comment JUST FOR YOU! MHA is a very good. However it is not in novel form. Meaning certain things are limited on art, characters and the arc it is taking place in. So some things I will add just to expand the general background. After all remember MHA is a story about Izuku and One for All. Certain things do need to be included to create a story that connects to MHA while not being a, "Oh I added a original character fan-fic." So yes it is a fan-fic. However it should also stand as its own story that is why there is new characters. So to add onto my other comment. Each added character is to add background to the story I am trying to write, or in my case, rewrite. Anyway just remember it is a fan fic though. It is just for enjoyment. If you don't think it is very interesting. Meh, it is whatever.
The exact harm thing is pretty obvious. I mean I feel that is just the introduction of common sense. I mean its never brought up in MHA however its pretty clear stuff. Also in my eyes healing quirks would be expensive if your paying for surgy with them. Maybe that's an America health care system talking though. With the OC's I will give a little spoilers. It connects all together into a single point. Obviously many things will be different in the story as it progress. It is being rewritten in, I'm at like chapter 40 on the rewrite.(when I wrote this comment) As for the villian oc you mention, its not a villian. Connects to the overall set up being built with the three characters. After all I'll say it now. The MC isn't in the MHA Eri Saga. (At least in the idea of context of the rewrite) Finally, thank you for the review. I do appreciate it.