Review Detail of HeikyZX in My Hero: Quirk Evolution
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It started decently: nice Quirk, good start except for MC SUDDENDLY knowing exactly how to harm another person just enough to cripple them forever (taking into account their Quirks but forgetting about possible healing Quirks, so yeah, faulty), nice plot device to connect MC to Mirko as her disciple/successor Then... well, like in many other fics, the OC started devouring the fanfiction. I mean, an interesting OC actually doing anything other than having a 'hole' or being a rescue target is great, which isn't the case for this. Then there's the new and even more dumb/silly OC villains related to them... Finally, by chapter 30~, the story all but focuses on the OCs to the point of the author even forgetting to describe or work the characters of the actual fic world, leaving even the MC to the side. Combined with the changes that I didn't like in the general plot, like the I-Island arc all but disappearing thanks to an OC's actions FAR before the actual occurring of the arc and the seemly dead update of the story: I don't recommend this one.
My Hero: Quirk Evolution
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The exact harm thing is pretty obvious. I mean I feel that is just the introduction of common sense. I mean its never brought up in MHA however its pretty clear stuff. Also in my eyes healing quirks would be expensive if your paying for surgy with them. Maybe that's an America health care system talking though. With the OC's I will give a little spoilers. It connects all together into a single point. Obviously many things will be different in the story as it progress. It is being rewritten in, I'm at like chapter 40 on the rewrite.(when I wrote this comment) As for the villian oc you mention, its not a villian. Connects to the overall set up being built with the three characters. After all I'll say it now. The MC isn't in the MHA Eri Saga. (At least in the idea of context of the rewrite) Finally, thank you for the review. I do appreciate it.