myurikko

Interesting concept, but being held back by some poor grammar choices and clunky sentence structure. My main issue is with sentences that run on far longer than they should. I'd prefer they be shortened and separated. Like others mentioned, the MC is rather cringy and annoying at times. Some of these same reviewers also say this gets better later on, though I'm not sure what that point is myself (I'm only around chapter 30). Maybe author Pancakes-san has an opinion about that. I do, however, appreciate that Kireina's power is composed of *both* innate OP-ness and clever combinations and utility of her existing skills. I hope that she learns a little self-restraint with horniness and exaggeration though, as it seems Serious-Mode Kireina is an existence on a completely different level than one might expect. In the end, it seems like I'll be sticking with the novel, especially if it continues to improve.

Perfectly normal.... right?

R*pe as a plot device... Glad it didn't happen, but this is a disgusting trope.

Plant measurement is a unique idea. Perhaps voice magic has a positive affect on other plants as well?

As the story hasn't developed too far yet, I'm lowering some of the scores. So far, it seems like your typical power-fantasy type story, and there's nothing wrong with that. Unfortunately, errors with spelling, grammar, and punctuation are rather common. It's still perfectly readable, but I feel it's still annoying. Perhaps the presence of an editor would help this. I also feel like the author could work more on descriptive language in order to add more detail and "real-ness" to the story. I do realize I'm being quite harsh to a new author. However, I firmly believe that constructive criticism is beneficial and necessary to encourage growth.

Interesting writing style. I don't remember exactly what it's called, but it's present-tense 3rd person for sure. Minor punctuation errors here and there (mostly just missing periods) but it doesn't hurt the story- still perfectly understandable. The bit about the 'wall' is slightly confusing, but as far as I can tell, it's not something so significant that it would make the rest of the story difficult.

dead comment, but would be appreciated

Cultivation novels with a female MC are always welcome. Rather refreshing to be honest, and I'm looking forward to reading more. Little Hou is a silly little thing.

how was it explained there?

I completely relate to this