Man... Two words. Nine-

What're u doing here?

Spectacular.

yes

No only 1

Thx

Life. Did I accidently say light in a paragraph?

Ikr. This author is very late. Even when they said 'daily chapters.'

I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.

The day I try write xianxia characters, is the day I get a girlfriend... never.

That's what the rip meant

1st answer. I had no idea how I would integrate him into the festival. Unless I wanted him to prevent Yang getting banned from the tournament, or him helping Ruby, I just wouldn't know what else to do.

*sucks in breath*

Genius.

Oh, shit.

tx for that tho

Damn bro, that's crazy.