Piiiiza
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Piiiiza2 years agoCommented- Piiiiza3 years agoCommented
Man... Two words. Nine-
- Piiiiza4 years agoCommented
What're u doing here?
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Spectacular.
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yes
- Piiiiza4 years agoReplied to Overking1974
No only 1
- Piiiiza4 years agoReplied to Dragon_Incarnation
Thx
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Life. Did I accidently say light in a paragraph?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Piiiiza4 years agoReplied to Zailo95
Ikr. This author is very late. Even when they said 'daily chapters.'
- Piiiiza4 years agoPosted
I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.
