Review Detail of Piiiiza in A Game To Remember

I'm giving my honest review of my story. The writing quality is bad, and seems to lack actual motivation. Update Quality is ok. Story Development right now is weird. When they start travelling, not even that far in to it, and Ruby has already *Spoiler* It's seems a little to fast-paced. Character design is not doing it. He's barely shown interacting with other characters, apart from the System and Ruby. There are some small talks between Clarent, but that's it. World Background.... Heh.