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blackvile72mthCommentedseasoned warriors...and also carl 😆
It was business as usual in the business district that was one river across the slums, though one tiny thing was different. Five witchers, one Zerrikanian lady, and Carl were standing right outside two empty shops. Their smiles were as bright as the sun that day.- blackvile74mthPosted
Exceptionally well written. No grammar issues, that I noticed at least. Pacing isn't too fast or too slow. Characters are portrayed to have actual depth. ALL of the characters. The lack of MC POV made me personally feel like I missed out on a little of the journey, but the trade-offs are well worth it, to the point where I didn't even realize what was missing till someone else pointed it out. Overall, one of the best ATLA fanfics on this site. bonus points to the author for actually FINISHING it.
- blackvile75mthCommented🚨Insert Dinosaur GIFs/PICs here - Most likes wins🚨(A/N: only TWO entries per person!)
- blackvile77mthReplied to blackvile7
nevermind lolthe next paragraph answers my question.
Money , knickknacks , potions you name it and he accepted it all since after sacrificing it to the ring made his realm more and more perfect. Magical things for example broke down into mana and base elements that were fused into his mini planet of his realm. Interestingly this extra mana didn't dissipate back into the real world but stayed in the realm and increased the concentration of mana in the air. He cheated a bit once he found that out and took a trip into the realm to purge out most of his mana into the air which caused the concentration to rise greatly.- - blackvile77mthCommented
so could he theoretically stop the increase of ambient mana from the rituals by channeling the excess into his ring?
Money , knickknacks , potions you name it and he accepted it all since after sacrificing it to the ring made his realm more and more perfect. Magical things for example broke down into mana and base elements that were fused into his mini planet of his realm. Interestingly this extra mana didn't dissipate back into the real world but stayed in the realm and increased the concentration of mana in the air. He cheated a bit once he found that out and took a trip into the realm to purge out most of his mana into the air which caused the concentration to rise greatly.- - blackvile79mthCommented"Then I'll seat you at a table for four," responded the wolf-like woman, taking the initiative to lead the way. Izuku's eyes nearly lowered to her bushy tail as she turned around, but while he was certainly interested in heteromorphs, he wasn't a furry. He just had a healthy curiosity...
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- blackvile71yrReplied to Morg535(A/N: No harem, by the way (O w O)...)
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- blackvile71yrCommented
I just realized, Minato may be kinkier than I thought....
Her red wavy hair was up like it was one flames, and adamantium chains were out for the count. - blackvile71yrCommented
absolutely true. even if you are lactose intolerant
That's true by the way, milk has good protein and is good for your bones, no reason not to drink it. - blackvile71yrCommented
orc you say..? I see...
"An Orc huh, why don't see many of your kind here outside your strongholds. Captain, it appears he's not on the list." Hadvar says. - blackvile71yrPosted
I've never done a review in the 4 years I've been reading on this site. This novel undoubtedly deserves my review cherry lol. Reminds me a lot of "mages are too op" but in star wars. Great pacing, good character development, fantastic grammar, which is a rarity among this site's fanfics. Please please please don't drop author.
- blackvile71yrReplied to Ototsu_YumeAfter finishing the set, his Magical power surged. His Gaseous Magical Core finally transformed into Liquid Magical Core and with that, his Magical might increased several folds, but there was still a lot he desired. He might have grown stronger, but he didn't have any real-life experience.
- blackvile71yrCommentedAfter he replies, the ring glows slightly and Tom could hear the voice again say '~You qualify~'. The ring then stops glowing and the voice disappears as if it was never there in the first place.