Review Detail of blackvile7 in Focused Fire (ATLA)

Exceptionally well written. No grammar issues, that I noticed at least. Pacing isn't too fast or too slow. Characters are portrayed to have actual depth. ALL of the characters. The lack of MC POV made me personally feel like I missed out on a little of the journey, but the trade-offs are well worth it, to the point where I didn't even realize what was missing till someone else pointed it out. Overall, one of the best ATLA fanfics on this site. bonus points to the author for actually FINISHING it.