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I haven't read much so it may change, but the character interactions and dialogue is absolutely atrocious. I can't stand it anymore. It's plain bad, and I hope it improves later on, because there is a ton of potential in this novel. I really like all the parts where there isn't any interactions with other characters, but it should be that I like all parts of the story, not just a few.
This is an amazing novel so far, and I hope the author can keep it up. I really like the plot and the MC has pretty clear goals to work towards which keeps me engaged and also interested to see what happens next. The grammar is good, I can't spot and really big or dumb discrepancies in what happens in the story either. Overall I just think this is an extremely solid read and I would encourage you to pick it up and persevere through some more boring parts of the story.
This is based heavily off The Legendary Mechanic and it's original enough to enjoy if you want something similar to TLM, because the only things taken from TLM are the system and MC is NPC part and some other smaller things. Honestly I would just recommend this overall, because it's The Legendary Mechanic but its The Legendary Mage.