LunarSeven

Chances are you won’t see this but I would 100% pay $10-$15 a month for this to be continued! ^^

Amazing story. I loved the og version and I like the rewrite even more. Quite literally the only complaint I have is that there isn’t more chapters. Best fanfic I’ve read in a significant time.

I’m a little late but I’m very excited to see the changes made to this story along with it’s continuation! I loved the original and I’m sure I’ll love this. Happy reading all ^^

Regardless of what others are saying (especially about the romance aspect) I enjoy this story very much. I like mc’s personality and his relationship with his wives. I enjoy romance in stories like this and I will most certainly continue to read it. Good luck to you and Godspeed mr author. :)

Hello world my review time. I’m really liking the story more so than the last version grammer and spelling are good enough to ignore the mistakes, the romance is hehehe enjoyable his personality and background are enjoyable to me as well. Overall personally I enjoy it, no more rewrites please :(

I’ bored and this is my seccond time reading this so here goes As Mirio phased through me for what could be considered the 10 time I was fed up. Dashing past him I restricted his body “What is this” Mirio was confused he had never felt this before, it was as if his body was stopping itself from moving forward. “You feel it, right?” The look of confusion was amusing from one considered one of the “Big Three” of UA. “What is inside you?” Confusion spread over the crowd “bones, organs, veins, but what is inside all of those?” You could see some among them realize as fear of what was to come spread over their faces. “Blood! Your blood is your enemy!” At that moment Mirio veins contracted as his blood rushed throughout his body. He didn’t even have time to scream, the pain was to much to bear and he passed out. (My revision of part of it)

We can pretend

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Good for you I’m 16 and 5’ 7