Kalushar_Vulpine

This is awful writing, just the most forced garbage I’ve ever read

Go to other worlds how? Bro what is this awful lore

Awful dialogue

So having no ability isn’t rare, not even uncommon. But people don’t use weapons anymore? And there’s barely a peace treaty in effect? Man this writer contradicts himself worse than a skinny chef.

Bro, the main character is a simp, I’m calling it now.

Not many people carry weapons? In a world constantly under threat of war? Is this writer smoking something?

That’s the cringiest name I’ve heard in a long time. Vorden Blade, cringe.

Bro can’t do math.

Please let this story get better. So far this writing is just… terrible, did this guy not edit at all?

Not a great start. Poor writing, but we’ll see if it gets better. So far the plot and lore is nonsensical. 2/5