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Royal_May11mthCommentedwhat's with the 3 chapters regarding his birth? it's boring, he just escaped the dungeon, it was bad enough that it slowed down to the 3 of them relaxing in the snow but this is worse, I don't need a flashback event, it made my eyes cross just trying to read so I skipped it to get back into the story, but it's just this, this sucks
Ch 179 A Birth Tainted By Blood- Royal_May11mthCommented
what happened to the gaping hole in her chest? she was bleeding out and basically dead, why is she up and moving around?
This paragraph has been deleted. - Royal_May1yrCommented
what skill was used here?
It wasn't completely paralyzed, as the Magic Skill's Rank was only [E+]. - Royal_May2yrCommented
so..... Aldrich is Kenichi?
It was in essence mixed martial arts, but it had a heavy focus on striking and throws. He trained considerably in boxing, Muay Thai, kickboxing, Taekwondo, and even some aspects of Chinese martial arts to maximize his footwork mobility and striking strength. - Royal_May2yrReplied to Daoist_Red_Reads
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the concept is interesting, but the punctuation (or lack thereof in some cases), spelling/ grammatical errors, the pacing, and the writing jumping around quite a bit is rather annoying, since I have ADHD it makes focusing on and enjoying the story difficult. granted I've only read about 18 chapters and it probably gets better, but as I said, it's difficult to focus on and enjoy
- Royal_May2yrCommentedCh 72 Goblin Lord Hunt II
- Royal_May3yrReplied to Hunter_Grey
Hey Chicka bump bump
Suddenly, Han Xiao felt as though a large amount of data was being transmitted into his mind, causing his head to throb painfully. The last thing he could remember was accepting a leveling assignment. He was in the midst of creating a new character in 'Galaxy' when he seemingly started to smell burnt eggs⌠- Royal_May3yrCommented
No wonder why it's gotten more expensive, Disney acquired it due to its mention of Star Wars
The Colton Star Cluster consisted of many different Star Systems, and Godora's territory was in the Gavin Star System. From the star map, Godora was located in the south-west of the Colton Star Cluster and shared borders with three other Star Systems. The Fawn Star System, which was controlled by Holy Stone and Black Raven; Hutt Civilization controlled by the Skywalker Star System; and the Hyde Star System, which did not have a dominant ruling party. - Royal_May3yrCommentedCh 470 Experience Fully Digested!