Review Detail of Royal_May in Transmigrated as a Ghost

the concept is interesting, but the punctuation (or lack thereof in some cases), spelling/ grammatical errors, the pacing, and the writing jumping around quite a bit is rather annoying, since I have ADHD it makes focusing on and enjoying the story difficult. granted I've only read about 18 chapters and it probably gets better, but as I said, it's difficult to focus on and enjoy