I like this reference by Rorschach

Man, I didn't create expectations initially, but it surprises me, it's good, it creates a unique perspective on the HPT world, and the elf theme is empathic

Dude, one question, are you going to edit the story in the middle, or just post the original novel?

+1

shots fire lol

i think what he wants to say is China... or Huxia

I agree, only talking about this fact

where is he killing Gran Torino? discount the anger in the trees? fu% k, he’s a tenno’s poha, he should kill the idiot’s poha and hunt down the stalker

Please.. for me?

You can kill gran torina?

what's the use of being calm in the act and 2 minutes later put your whole stomach out of disgust?

I really liked the story, with an interesting cheat without much repetition From another fic, but the moments when the author tries to put exaggerated realism disappoint me a lot because despite having a good development the story ends up having moments when the climax is spoiled for something stupid like him vomiting and crying for killing a Nazi who wanted to kill him and his girlfriend, this scene is followed by torture by another Nazi, showing the obvious inconsistency in the protagonist's actions.

for me i really liked the story, but these moments make me want to stop, it's just disappointing

only the constant use of a clear mind should make him think even more clearly without being exposed to prolonged calm, thus making his mind accustom to a certain pattern (this can be interpreted as bullshit jutsu )

the author probably did his homework with the realism business, but ends up getting out of control, because it cannot be framed by behavior patterns of normal people who just killed someone

even with the excuse of a clear mind, you can't deny that he killed before, and he knows that he will kill more, so why not prepare yourself psychologically for it

and then there's the scene of him torturing the guy, if that's not inconsistency I don't know what is

and not comparing him to a trained soldier because he is not, but he is still supposedly one of the brightest minds that exists so I should think rationally that I should not deal with that situation in such a fragile and stupid way

if not, all soldiers would be crying with snot on their nose every time they killed a troop of terrorists

I'm not talking about getting used to killing, I'm talking about getting used to dealing with the dead, like all the mechanisms to escape this situation