webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of Utcz in -*-Deleted-*-

Review detail

Utcz
UtczLv13yrUtcz

I really liked the story, with an interesting cheat without much repetition From another fic, but the moments when the author tries to put exaggerated realism disappoint me a lot because despite having a good development the story ends up having moments when the climax is spoiled for something stupid like him vomiting and crying for killing a Nazi who wanted to kill him and his girlfriend, this scene is followed by torture by another Nazi, showing the obvious inconsistency in the protagonist's actions.

altalt

-*-Deleted-*-

I_am_potato_lord

Liked by 2 people

LIKE

Replies2

Utcz
UtczLv1Utcz

what's the use of being calm in the act and 2 minutes later put your whole stomach out of disgust?

I_am_potato_lord:u do realise he had calm mind active when he tortured/ killed those nazis? i specifically mentioned it.
I_am_potato_lord
I_am_potato_lordAuthorI_am_potato_lord

u do realise he had calm mind active when he tortured/ killed those nazis? i specifically mentioned it.