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Maybe I'm dumb but I find this a bit hard to read. Just the way everything is structured makes it a bit hard for me to follow the chapter where he was narrating future events is a good example of this I couldn't tell what was going on and thought you decided to do a massive jump cut, I've seen stories do that before so I wasn't sure. Other than that it would be cool if there was a pic of the mc I was following along til you said blue hair so is the appearance just Rimirru I'm not sure.
Story is really good only issue was a few of the character names in the early beginning but overall story seems to be fun. I really like stories that take place jn the Arthur Era. I do have to wonder if this is a translation though I'd be interested to find the original but frankly I have no idea how to find those type of stories.
I typically don't read stories until they have more chapters so I can read them in one go but this concept kinda interested me. I've been getting into Honkai/Hoyoverse through fanfics, and Danmachi is pretty good base for xover fanfic material. I'm interested to see where this story goes.
Ok ngl that life point line went hard af felt like it was lifted from the anime actually got me slightly hyped. Nice job bro, also that ring sounds really nice I have a hard time picturing it because my imagination sucks but it sounds like you put a lot of thought into it.
I mean cool, eye powers are always cool bit it seems a bit strange for it to just happen like this I don't know. It just feels kinda random there wasn't any foreshadowing of this besides giving him an adaptive body in chapter 2 but I never thought it'd lead to this.
Ok I've been reading this for a but and have to say love your story I know a decent amount about W.O.W. because my friend plays and tells me stuff. I don't know about Might and Magic but I feel like I have somewhat of an understanding thanks to your fic. Just want to say this is awesome your awesome and keep up the good work
I like this story but This is literally a demon lord's Hero. I'm not sure if you're the original author and changed your name and decided to rewrite the story but I doubt it. The chapters are word for word from A Demon Lord's Hero and you haven't credited the Author at all.
Ok so this story has a fun premise with being reborn as a god and trying to change fate and all that. Also the mass updates are nice but it's really hard to get invested with these cultural differences. It is easy to tell that this is a translation but it needs to be refined a bit more. Like put through grammarly and chat gpt or just both. I can follow what's going on but because of the quality It doesn't feel like a complete story. I feel like it did get a but better in the later chapters but still.