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Kevin_Valentin
Kevin_ValentinLv16mthKevin_Valentin

Ok so this story has a fun premise with being reborn as a god and trying to change fate and all that. Also the mass updates are nice but it's really hard to get invested with these cultural differences. It is easy to tell that this is a translation but it needs to be refined a bit more. Like put through grammarly and chat gpt or just both. I can follow what's going on but because of the quality It doesn't feel like a complete story. I feel like it did get a but better in the later chapters but still.

GOD protag after v.3

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Kevin_Valentin
Kevin_ValentinLv1Kevin_Valentin

Bit sorry typed on a phone

Thefallenone666
Thefallenone666Lv1Thefallenone666

It's a good thing you stopped. Past chapter 570, or Vol 2 chapter 370, it completely changes to a different novel. Not sure if it was the publishers fault or just ripped it from somewhere but its very jarring, mostly cuz it stops right at the good part.....