Review Detail of Kevin_Valentin in Overlord: Еmptiness

Maybe I'm dumb but I find this a bit hard to read. Just the way everything is structured makes it a bit hard for me to follow the chapter where he was narrating future events is a good example of this I couldn't tell what was going on and thought you decided to do a massive jump cut, I've seen stories do that before so I wasn't sure. Other than that it would be cool if there was a pic of the mc I was following along til you said blue hair so is the appearance just Rimirru I'm not sure.