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Review Detail of Nihil_Est_Scriptor in Red Blood Century

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Nihil_Est_Scriptor
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The story is really interesting and captivating. The writing is good and easy to understand. The story development seems to be well paced. The character designs are alright. The world background is also well written and mysterious. What I have to say is about the writing style. The author had made some grammatical errors in the chapters. For example, I would not see capital letters at the starting of a dialogue or maybe there would not be enough commas and full stops. The author is also rather straightforward with her writing. For example, the author does not explain much in the chapters, like showing us how the characters are feeling and the chapter also lacked some descriptive writing. Not that it bothered me that much, but some readers might like to visualize the whole story. I am writing this review after reading like 6 chapters or so; if the author does correct her mistakes in the later chapters, you all can discard my critic. Other than that, I really think that you should give this story a chance. It is very mysterious and captivating; it will keep you hooked. Author, well done. I wish you best of lucks!

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